Under a Waning Sun OOC

soundofmind · 2025-01-22T10:02:31Z

𖤓 Under a Waning Sun 𖤓 In the depths of the Outlands, in a small town called Sticks, people only know a life of subjugation. The Blue Suns - a notorious criminal organization - control everything, and their extortion of the people only offers protection from themselves. Growing up here is harsh and unforgiving, and finding a way out feels nigh impossible: most never do. This story will follow the lives of six people who begin as childhood friends and eventually grow apart. Each takes a different charted path, paving their own way to success, destruction, or the painful in-between. 𖤓 Riseup Pad 𖤓 Parameters and Expectations: I've been doing storybooks for a long time and have found a rhythm that works for me that I like as a DM. If it isn't your cup of tea, I won't be offended if it turns you away! Please account for the following if you want to consider joining, as this is how I intend to run the SB. - This will be a fast-paced SB. I plan to finish this in 1 year at most. - It will be a smaller team, with a maximum of 6 writers. I'm capping it at 6 out of preference for what I find manageable! - We will have a collaborative writing session planned once-a-week on Tuesday evenings in a riseup pad (but are not confined to it). You are expected to write, plan/outline, communicate, or collaborate once a week. Collaboration is highly encouraged and expected: this is not a solo project. You'll need to be comfortable with it! - If you sign up for this SB I ask that you commit to finishing the story to completion. - Writers must be comfortable with writing others' characters when necessary. On the flip side, be comfortable with someone else writing your character. Run any big character decisions by the writer first. - But what if life happens? Of course there will be exceptions for life emergencies and pressures! I will not be unreasonable! There is no judgment for needing to leave or step away, but if you need to leave for any reason please be willing for us to write your character out of the story to our discretion as it makes sense for the plot. You, of course, can have input in this, but will not be required to if current circumstances demand you pull away quickly! Ideally, if you can help close your character's chapter, that would be lovely as a sendoff. SB Organization: - Once the SB launches officially, you will be expected to complete a CP within the first week to ensure your spot. If you are invested but this deadline isn't doable for you, let me know. - The story will be planned out in stages based on character ages and story development, themed after phases of the moon (in theme with the oxymoronic name Blue Suns ). We will plan specific character beats, key events, and what will be necessary for growth/development in each stage. - Each stage will consist of one POV post per character (if posts go much longer than 2k, they may be split). The stages remaining: > Waning Gibbous - Ages 20-23. The mess of conflicts will then play out. Caelan: Caelan knows the full extent of Ivy's plan and he makes sure he's nowhere near the base when everything falls apart. He prepares to incriminate Ivy. Caelan casually mentions something to Ossie about Ivy's plans after Ossie brings in Adonis's dead body and warns him too late to save the base (just the morning before). During this exchange, Caelan feels something almost like sadness/grief when he sees Adonis is dead, but he hides his emotions behind a very neutral/weird mixed expression and pretends like nothing is wrong when he says his bait line to Ossie. "If I were you I wouldn't go to the party tonight... and I'd keep an eye on Ivy." He leaves it to Ossie to dispose of the body. He makes sure that all the most important of his things are already gone from Sticks. He also monitors the activity of the other main characters in case they are going to get in his way. Ramona: Ramona finds out from Hoss that their father died of an overdose. This is triggered by Hoss catching her toying with lumshade from a recent haul: visibly contemplating trying it. Hoss harshly chastises her and says if she does, she'll be just like her father. She didn't know that's what happened, and it shakes her a bit: she's become the big lumshade dealer on the streets. She confides in Ossie about this. For the first time, she actually feels some regret, and feels nervous for Silas -- not just because Silas is a friend, but because Silas is Uriah's son, and she knows she can't be responsible for his death. Ramona trepidatiously tries to broach the subject: she can't sell to him anymore. At this rate, he's going to kill himself. This does not go over well with Silas the night before he's gonna help Saoirse kills his DAD. AKA: "NOT the best time for me to lose the one thing that's holding me together >:|" Silas ends up telling Ramona the reason why he needs lumshade, and Ramona begrudgingly continues dealing to him, just less. Silas: When Ramona tells Silas she needs to cut off his drug supply for his own good, Silas tells her why he needed lumshade to begin with. Ramona will not know what to do with this information. She will unhelpfully say: "Sometimes, it's better to go with the flow of the stream and not fight it. Sounds like you were destined to be a Sun after all :)" and will continue to deal to him, just less. Saoirse and Silas finalize the plan to kill Uriah, including a way to keep Delia safe. Silas helps Saoirse sneak in. Saoirse: Uriah personally confronts Saoirse about her "relationship" with Silas. It's clear that by now he does not view her as family: only a threat to the control he wants over his son. "Don't you think your family has suffered enough to 'protect him' from me? He doesn't need your 'protection' anymore. He's mine. You should be worried about who else will need protection." He insinuates a threat against her siblings and father, and leaves Saoirse with the ominous warning. Per Silas' urging, Saoirse's family invites Delia to a solstice celebration in the Sticks the night of the summer solstice party. They phrase it as a way to mend ties and reconnect as a family, but really it's a way to protect her during Uriah's murder. She and Silas sneak into the base. Ossie: Uriah plants the idea in his head that his parents were never really his family, and they left him alone to raise his two sisters. Uriah suggests that Ossie's sisters would both be safer in the hands of the blue suns, not in the hands of two people who left a ten year old to look after three younger children.

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Thu Jul 31, 2025 4:04 pm

soundofmind says... · Thu Jul 31, 2025 4:04 pm

AYoooooo!! Page three!!!! And all completed posts are OUT of the pad!

Now we just have the Ossie post and the Silas (bday) post left to complete before we get to chapter four. Very exciting! I should be able to make it to next week, no problem!

I think next week if ya'll can make it, we'll have @winterwolf0100 and @Wolfi focus on writing their posts, and prioritizing collabing. If anyone wants to work ahead/think about next chapter in the downtime, I'll move that outline into the pad just so we can start moving that direction in the next week or two.

Love you guys and I'm so thankful I get to do this with you guys every week. It's continued to be a fun outlet to grow as a writer with friends. Hope you're all hanging in there <3

Let me know your ETA's for this next Monday! @Lael, what's your work schedule like?

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Thu Jul 31, 2025 4:15 pm

Silvern says... · Thu Jul 31, 2025 4:15 pm

YAY PAGE THREE

I’ll let you know a little closer to the day of when I’ll be there— I start a trip today and still need to figure out which things happen on which evenings!

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Thu Jul 31, 2025 4:34 pm

Wolfi says... · Thu Jul 31, 2025 4:34 pm

I do think I have something on Monday night - not sure what time yet! Most likely I'll need to head out early

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Thu Jul 31, 2025 4:56 pm

soundofmind says... · Thu Jul 31, 2025 4:56 pm

@Wolfi if you’d want to chip at the post sometime this week that is an option as well! nw either way

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Thu Jul 31, 2025 8:54 pm

Corvid says... · Thu Jul 31, 2025 8:54 pm

YOOOO PAGE 3

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 4:27 am

Lael says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 4:27 am

I’m sorry, I won’t be able to come for the next five Mondays! >.< But let’s set up some alternative times to write.

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:11 pm

soundofmind says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:11 pm

Would you guys want to try this next Tuesday instead? Would everyone be sble to make that if it’s the same time? I’m flexible!

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:40 pm

Silvern says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:40 pm

Assuming I have service (my connection is tenuous and for some reason hates riseup in particular) I should be able to join Tuesday!

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:43 pm

Wolfi says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:43 pm

That works for me!

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:54 pm

Lael says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:54 pm

Unfortunately I’m working Tuesday night as well, so I won’t be able to make it then either. The second half of the week is better for me if I am urgently needed to write something :’)

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 4:43 pm

soundofmind says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 4:43 pm

Just wanna see if we can get everybody - what about Thursday?

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 5:41 pm

Wolfi says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 5:41 pm

I'd need to hop out after the first hour for a remote meeting, but it shouldn't take too long

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 6:30 pm

Silvern says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 6:30 pm

I might be late but it’s feasible!

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 7:00 pm

winterwolf0100 says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 7:00 pm

I’ve got shows on Thursday nights so I don’t think that will work for me, but I can try to find more time to write on my own if that’s what works for others

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Fri Aug 01, 2025 8:36 pm

soundofmind says... · Fri Aug 01, 2025 8:36 pm

Ok lmao last call then - Wednesday???

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