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finding (and creating) avant-garde poems



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Mon Mar 28, 2022 12:45 am
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Kelisot says...



I don't exactly have a topic for all my poems, but I think the "avant-garde" theme (although this mostly applies to art) may be a new thing. Expect some funny, odd, and surreal poems here.

Table of Contents
1. JƎXTƎЯ
2. Xorona Xalda
3. Xikninŋ Paxologia
4. Sulhwa Hanayuki Xuehua Snow Flower (雪花)
5. Delta Waves
6. Odd Weather
7. Sin
8. Diyu
9. SOMEBODY SCREAM!!!
10. Quantum Annihilation
11. ???
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30. ???
31. ???

Spoiler! :
Wait, April has 30 days, not 31. Ah welp.
Last edited by Kelisot on Sat Apr 09, 2022 11:17 pm, edited 7 times in total.
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Fri Apr 01, 2022 4:20 pm
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01 Introduction - JEXTER

Spoiler! :
Look at me darling
My dazzling tricks amaze you
Shining jests kill you
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Fri Apr 01, 2022 11:57 pm
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Oh also, I'm probably going to make some of these poems become music if possible.
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Sat Apr 02, 2022 3:51 am
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Oh, wow. That ending came out of nowhere, and I love it! At first, the poem gave me a romantic circus vibe. A Rewrite the Stars vibe, almost. But then, with no warning, it does a complete 180 in the last line. You might not mean the "kill" part literally, but that's where my mind first went, and it turns the whole thing from performing star-crossed lovers to Harley Quinn in record time. Very fun and one of my favourite forms of poetic plot twist. I can't wait to see what you write next. And if you make music of any poetry, I'm there for it.
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Sun Apr 03, 2022 1:31 am
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02 - Xorona Xalda

For some of you who might've noticed the first word looking like "Corona", you are correct! The title originally is called "Corona Calda" (burning crown in Italian, I hope I translated correctly...) but who is corrupting all my poems with all these Xs?
I'm not sure if you can 100% call this a poem... it's kind of like song lyrics, but it's somewhat poetic. I'll put it up here, for now, I might release a different version of this poem... (fun fact: It's called "Texoro Version")
Spoiler! :
FIRE WREATH BLAZES
MORTAL DIVINITY DAZES
DEMONIC EYE GAZES
ANGELIC WING FAZES
LET'S GO
IT'S XORONA XALDA
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Sun Apr 03, 2022 2:32 am
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alliyah says...



oh my gosh the 2nd poem in your collection is extremely avant-guarde I liked the combo of the enspoilered caps text and the emotive author's note like vibe that I couldn't quite tell if it was poem or not a poem or part of the poem but I like the whole vibe. It's really interesting.

Also
Oh also, I'm probably going to make some of these poems become music if possible.


!! Cool - I hope you give that a try! I definitely want to attempt making a few of my poems this April into music too. So best of luck on your napo journey, you've got this!
you should know i am a time traveler &
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Sun Apr 03, 2022 7:26 pm
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03 - Xikniŋ Paxologia
Alright, this is ridiculous. This poem is supposed to say "Sickening Pathologia" but WHO THE HECK IS EDITING MY POEMS WITHOUT MY CONSENT??? NOT ONLY IS MY TITLE EDITED LIKE MY PREVIOUS POEM, BUT NOW THE POEM ALSO IS! PLEASE STOP!!!

Also, is anyone suffering what is happening to my poems too? Because it seems like I'm the only person having this issue... I was going to ask for some advice on solving this, but I don't think I can. Perhaps my keyboard is revolting or whatnot. I'll probably buy a new one.

Spoiler! :
Haa...
This blight
Haa...
This pain

The unbearable misery
Inflicting the innocent
Agonizing fragile bodies
Has inflicted me

Haa...
This paX̱̱̱̱̂̃́᷆᷇ologia
Haa...
This X̱̱̱̱̂̃́᷆᷇orrow

My body decaying
Winds scattering sinews
Sleep in tranquility
X̱̱̱̱̂̃́᷆᷇enonial dead self.
Last edited by Kelisot on Thu Apr 07, 2022 3:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Tue Apr 05, 2022 3:07 am
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05 - Snow Flower (雪花)
This isn't about a love poetry. Also, spoiler tags because there is... a lot of swearing and profanities. And no, this poem has nothing related to my real-life self. Just a disclaimer in case anyone finds them very offending.
And also yay to the fact that my poems aren't having odd corrupt letters (unlike my previous ones) and acting weird! I hope I didn't jinx it...

Spoiler! :
Snow Flower my bitch,
Danity yet a whore.
Do you have no shame,
Of your wicked deeds?

You decimated my flowers,
The blossoms I've cherished.
You damned lying whore!
You screwed-up fuckery!

You are great Inanna,
Then I am Ereshkigal.
Strip and be powerless,
Be killed and decay!

You're a pretty flower,
Elegant yet a thorn.
Snow Flower my bitch,
Kill your worthless self.
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Wed Apr 06, 2022 2:44 am
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06 - ∆elta Waves
new type of radiation lol
also be careful since like literally no one knows what happens if you're exposed to them too long... might die if unlucky

Spoiler! :
Aleph Bet Gimel
D is for Daleth
Alpha Beta Gamma
D is for Delta

Unlike others
Healing broken souls
Reviving the dead
Feeling happiness

However
Be warned of
As exposure itself
Is a deadly price


DOCUMENT-CONFIG4DEL: LOCKED
SCANNING...
ACCESS ALLOWED

Spoiler! :
Hello. This is Dr. Xenon speaking (and writing).
The discovery of the new element "Xeniala" has changed our Periodic Tables recently. This new-famed element is still being experimented with. However, we have several public announcements.
Several asteroids orbiting the Earth and other planets of the Solar System have shown signs of being made of Xeniala. Our expedition team is proud to say that these Asteroids are abundant in this new element, which will continue our research further.
However, we will publically announce that all isotopes of Xeniala are highly radioactive with a new form of radiation waves known as the "Delta Wave". This Delta Wave is yet to be known whether it is safe or harmless. We will use the Prisoners of Xenia to test these experiments.
Currently, this is the known information that I was able to access from other members of the MeQanixm Lab Corporation. Confidential information is an important norm across the MeQanixm Family, we sadly apologize that we are not able to explain to the public all the information we want for the sake of your safety.
Official documents, research, and experiment logs will be released to the public after circa 5 months. We all hope that the Diyu Society will still be strong despite the current issues happening in the Worlds.
This was Dr. Xenia, and now I am leaving.
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Thu Apr 07, 2022 3:07 am
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06 - Strange Weather
Today, we report that it is going to be -10 Degrees in Diyu. Such a strange weather for summer.
Spoiler! :
Today is funny weather
Summer yet snowfall
Today is weird weather
Sunny yet purple fog

Delta waves emitted
Defiled air exhaled
Dim radiation shines
Darkness is mine


TESTDEL EXPERIMENT LOG
Spoiler! :
TestDel-01
Taken:
01/23/XX
Subject: 50 Mus musculus
Test Purposes: Delta Wave exposure tests started with fauna creatures to test how impacting it would be upon a natural ecosystem.
Test Results: After 2 minutes of exposure, ██ subjects had died from radiation exposure. However, subjects who had survived radiation poisoning showed abnormal rapid growth.
Conclusion: Delta Waves have shown dangerous properties that may be worse than other radiation waves. Delta Waves clearly show destructive results if contaminating several natural ecosystems.
Last edited by Kelisot on Fri Apr 08, 2022 2:45 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Apr 08, 2022 2:43 am
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07 - Sin
ideas and concepts shift a lot
because our standards change
and when we hang upside down
the world starts altering
Spoiler! :
Rain showers us
Clouds lament
One damned soul
Falls into hell

Raining knives
Agonizing screams
Pull the trigger
And the deal is set

Untamed tongues
Running reckless
Murdering killers
Breaking others

End this nightmare
I desperately pray
A day will come
Liberating us all
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Fri Apr 08, 2022 10:17 pm
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08 - Diyu
Welcome to Hell the Society of the Wonderful Diyu!
Spoiler! :
Hell is for the innocent
Not for the murderers
Hell is for the lambs
Not for the wolves

Fall into the rabbit hole
Descending to madness
A cup of poisoned tea
Shall cure our sickness
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Sun Apr 10, 2022 12:57 am
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09 - SOMEBODY SCREAM!!!

Spoiler! :
Voice
A loud voice
Shouting out
It's us.
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Mon Apr 11, 2022 1:06 am
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10 - Quantum Annihilation

Spoiler! :
Understand me
Falling
Falling down
Into a pit
A deep pit
Where light dwells
And darkness escapes.

In a blink
The chance
Ten
For heaven
Twenty
For hell
Seventy
For nowhere.

Destroy
This cycle
Circles
Become lines
An end
It must be made
Help us.
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Mon Apr 11, 2022 4:47 pm
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11 - Low Battery
Spoiler! :
ring ring
dying
low energy
please charge
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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