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Thu Apr 02, 2020 12:01 pm
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Arcticus says...



It's kind of refreshing to see religious poetry on the site. Hearing someone speak of their faith experiences is so rare these days, sound. I'm happy that you're doing it and I hope to read more of these!
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Thu Apr 02, 2020 1:33 pm
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AvantCoffee says...



These rhymes are so effortless <3 And I completely agree with Arc: I really love that you're doing this for napo this year c:
If you would be a real seeker after truth, it is necessary that at least once in your life you doubt, as far as possible, all things.
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Sun Apr 05, 2020 2:42 am
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alliyah says...



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Gawhh! I'm so happy you're going with this theme sound - go you! :) I may need to get some religious poetry into my thread too.

I really liked all five poems you've posted so far - but I think the 2nd is my favorite your control of rhyme is excellent, and the careful devotion and theology in each one in excellent and seems really thought-out.

In your last poem the lines, "God inside / a fragile cage of skin and bone" is especially striking!

Looking forward to seeing where you end up with this thread! <3

Edit: Totally didn't see your thread didn't have the comment sticker on it! Sorry! I'll throw my comment under a spoiler ~ still loving the poetry though!
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Thu Apr 09, 2020 3:09 am
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soundofmind says...



09. when they receive you

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Thank you guys so much for the comments and I'm glad you're enjoying reading them :)
  





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