Love the imagery, Buranko! "frost withers" is shivery in a good way, and "burn the milky winter light" is such an intense picture! Great start to your NaPo
Your second poem is interesting and mysterious. It makes me wonder how the speaker is connected to the toothfairy, and what those notes are about. I also really like the expressiveness of the third poem, it really feels to me like there's a sense of surrender in the 'poem's' expression.
You've got great succinctness + use of word-economy in these Buranko; I'd love to see some more! Your third poem was probably my favorite here - I think it can be so easy for a poem about a poem to turn into something very cliche but you did a nice job making the poem feel like a beautiful little moment unfolding as each line opened up; and the final line ending in just "Light" I thought was a good way to close it out. Good luck in future writing! <3
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled. — Liminality
