This is the second "real" poem I've ever written (I'm just now learning the inside outs of poetry) so any advice you can give me would be awesome! It needs much work :3
I know this isn't exactly poetry, but I really need help with it and you're a poetry expert. Do you review song lyrics? If so, link is below. If not, just skip over this request. ^.^
I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live? — Homer Simpson
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