Hello CapitalMonday here for a review. I would like to begin on how the imagery in this plays are part in the reader's head and how well-written this piece really is. You use some must imagery in this that it kinda reminds me of Cinderella. I am a little confused on one part where you say wings make her fly as she fell. That part got me a little confused (I think it means she fell from heaven onto earth or something). Also how you described your hearts as a timpani (which I find very romantic) in this poem and how both your heartbeats roared together then after a while, you just sit their looking at her beauty.
This poem is very well-written and amazingly well for anyone to read. Also I wish I could write like you do.
Farewell,
CapitalMonday
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