This is the second "real" poem I've ever written (I'm just now learning the inside outs of poetry) so any advice you can give me would be awesome! It needs much work :3
I know this isn't exactly poetry, but I really need help with it and you're a poetry expert. Do you review song lyrics? If so, link is below. If not, just skip over this request. ^.^
It's crazy how your life can be twisted upside down inside out and around and you can get sushi from safeway still looking like a normal person — starchild314
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