Yes, I know I already have three reviews, but I just want to make sure I have people that will follow and review as I post chapters! Just any tips or corrections you can give me, I'm open to it!
Looking to get a bit of feedback on the first part of the first chapter of my NaNo novel. I'm largely interested in making sure it "works" as a hook, and doesn't overwhelm the reader with information.
Thanks, Disk
A man without a plan, or anything else for that matter. (Except a review thread).
I really want reviews on chapter 6. You don't have to read all the chapters to understand chapter 6, you just have to read chapter 1. They are both flashbacks and are closely linked. But if you have time I would love it if you could review all of the novel that I have out. There are some chapters that have a lot of review and some that have barely any. Sorry if my grammar and sentences are horrible, it's late and my brain is not functioning properly due to a migraine.
Would you be interested in reviewing this new favorite story of mine?
White Bird Fantasy/Romance Rated M - Novel Story (for later chapters) It starts out 12+ Currently at two chapters, total 2k+ each.
A young maiden living at the foot of a mountain, cut off from the world, wishes for the chance to meet another living soul. Her wish is finally granted, but in the form of a badly bruised and beaten wolf. With a nurturing heart, she cares for the creature and brings it back to good health. Only to discover it's hardly the normal animal she believed it to be..
I'd like if you could look more towards the pace and characters. Something I worry about the most lol
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