I don't really know how this works honestly haha. I'm probably over thinking this, but whoever I have to review then just pm me and i'll do it . And if you want to review me check http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93378 that out
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
If you could, I'd love for you to either write a review on Sunshine or Pagan (they're short stories). If you can't find them, I'll try to find you a link or maybe let you see a Google Doc version?
Well this is awkward...I reviewed that piece quite a while ago...but I want to throw mine out there...I know!
To the next reviewer: Please review Hero's work first- work.php?id=96570 and then mine, which is Chapter Three of my story, divided into two parts, which can be found right here...
If you PM me your link, when you post it on here, I'll review it. That way you'll get two reviews, in exchanged for giving two...yeah, that should work.
~Shady
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Well, your story is a dot. If you've moved it to a different location I'd be happy to review it but for the next poster: work.php?id=98716 That's the second chapter. I'd probably advise you to read the first one too but I'm more bothered about the review for the second one as I don't have many on there
"We can lick gravity but sometimes the paperwork is overwhelming." ~ Wernher von Braun
Hiya! This is my first time on this website so please excuse any mistakes... I started writing this piece as stress release, but I'd be interested to see what anyone else thinks. It does swear a bit, and is intended as an opening chapteer to a longer novel. Thank you for taking the time to read!
"What is a poet? An unhappy person who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music." — Søren Kierkegaard, Philosopher & Theologian
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