z

Young Writers Society


Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]



User avatar
1087 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 44360
Reviews: 1087
Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:17 pm
Sins says...



Fine, 'cause I'm so epically nice...

So that you look cooler and more popular, I'll request a review, giving you more responses to your WRFF thread. I bet you feel lucky. ;) I mean, I don't benefit from it at all... *cough* It's not like your reviews are good... *double cough*

topic71938.html

Yeah... tidy. Thanks. :P
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





User avatar
100 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 6748
Reviews: 100
Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:15 pm
Idraax says...



Canyou try and review my poem, Pink? Please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post786357.html#p786357
Check these out please! :)
Alezrani
Will review for food thread
  





User avatar
33 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1279
Reviews: 33
Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:53 pm
View Likes
Roal says...



Hey Pink! It's been, a long time? I guess lol. But can you review my chapter 2 P. 2 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer: viewtopic.php?t=72113

Thanks :]
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





User avatar
562 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 719
Reviews: 562
Thu Nov 18, 2010 9:20 pm
Button says...



If you have the time, could you please look at topic72154.html?

I would appreciate it SOOOOoooo much. :)
Thanks!
-Coral-
  





User avatar
816 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 44887
Reviews: 816
Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:08 am
Shearwater says...



Skins-Done!
Idraax-Done!
Roal-Done!
Coral-Done!

Taking up more request if any.
Last edited by Shearwater on Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham
  





User avatar
10 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1051
Reviews: 10




User avatar
140 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1354
Reviews: 140
Fri Nov 19, 2010 9:14 pm
SilentRain says...



Hello there!
You haven't had many poetry requests, so here is one for you!

topic72172.html

If you review good, you'll be stuck with me for life!!
Unless you don't want that...:)

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





User avatar
8 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 1040
Reviews: 8
Sat Nov 20, 2010 5:13 am
Riveneye says...



Alright I got a fantasy story for you. It's out of my novel of short stories.

topic71734.html

Oh yeah and please and thank you
:D
Fiction flight is almost here. Check us out on Facebook http://www.facebook.com/pages/Fiction-Flight/130489243696865
(yea we don't have a website casue we can't think of a publishing name yet.)
  





User avatar
816 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 44887
Reviews: 816
Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:45 pm
Shearwater says...



niccinic15-Done!
SilentRain-Done!
Riveneye-Done!

Feed me your stories.
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham
  





User avatar
100 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 6748
Reviews: 100
Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:20 am
Idraax says...



Can you do my Chapter 7Pink? Please? There's a summary included, so you don't have to read the preceding chapters. I called it Alezrani as a temporary title. The one on my novel cover's the actual one. I just want to know how the characterization was. You don't have to if you don't want to. Thanks! :)
Check these out please! :)
Alezrani
Will review for food thread
  





User avatar
147 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 8517
Reviews: 147
Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:07 pm
Tigersprite says...



Can you please read this and tear it apart Pink? topic72264.html

Thanks in advance,

Tiger
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do."
Nathan Leopold
  





User avatar
816 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 44887
Reviews: 816
Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:10 am
Shearwater says...



Idraax-Done!
TIGERSPRITE-Done!

Thanks for the request guys, now feed me more. :3
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham
  





User avatar
1087 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 44360
Reviews: 1087
Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:34 am
Sins says...



Oi, girl who pretends she's not ginger when she is clearly an orange headed dwarf.

Could you review the first chapter of my novel for me? It guarantees you love... By my cat. She's ginger too, you know.

topic72285.html#p788065

Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





User avatar
816 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 44887
Reviews: 816
Wed Nov 24, 2010 12:44 am
Shearwater says...



Skins-Done!

Image
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham
  





User avatar
556 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 37146
Reviews: 556
Sat Nov 27, 2010 10:05 am
ziggiefred says...



Hey, hellooo.
Could you please review my short story, please :)
post789726.html#p789726

Phew, thanks a lot.
The best is what you make it!

...eh, need a review? Click me!
  








Darkness cannot drive out darkness: only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate: only love can do that.
— Martin Luther King Jr.