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Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:18 pm
JJxVoodo says...



Hey, can you review this for me viewtopic.php?t=79955 ? Thank-you :D

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Fri Apr 29, 2011 8:11 pm
Rascalover says...



All done who's next? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Wed May 04, 2011 10:25 pm
Rascalover says...



bump :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Wed May 04, 2011 10:45 pm
Jas says...



topic80222.html

Hi! :D Can I pwease get a review on this? Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Wed May 04, 2011 10:47 pm
PhoenixRain says...



Mine please? :) post857370.html#p857370 Thanks a million! :)
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Sun May 08, 2011 8:50 pm
Rascalover says...



All done. Who needs another review? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Mon May 09, 2011 9:12 am
Hecate says...



Hey can you review my short story for me?

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Tue May 10, 2011 12:09 am
Rascalover says...



All done. Who needs a review?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue May 10, 2011 12:53 am
synismysyn3 says...



Do you think you'll be able to check out these three. Thieir the same novel, but in different chapters.

viewtopic.php?t=77639
First Chapter

viewtopic.php?t=78810
Second Chap.

viewtopic.php?t=80363
Third Chap.

Plz and thankiess (:
  





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Wed May 11, 2011 8:52 pm
ktajlili says...



Do you care to review my first story posted here, the Seeker Chapter 7?
  





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Thu May 12, 2011 12:13 am
LittlePrincess says...



I'm linking you to my novel, novel.php?id=1419
I only have two chapters up, although I may put a third up later. I would really appreciate a review for chapter 2 but it probably makes more sense if you read chapter one.
I'm happy to return the favor. If you want just post a link at the end of your review and I'll check it out :) thank you!
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Thu May 12, 2011 1:55 am
sarebear says...



Hi Rascalover,

I'm here for a review! This is the first chapter of a romance novel I was working on and would love some help! Here's the link: topic80672.html


Thanks!
Sarebear
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Thu May 12, 2011 10:04 pm
danceallnight says...



post860764.html#p860764

refer to my latest post its the edited version :D
  





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Sat May 14, 2011 4:38 am
Rascalover says...



While Im working on all of these more request are welcomed! :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sat May 21, 2011 5:57 am
MadameLuxestrange says...



Hey, was wondering if you'd read my romance short story... here's the link if you would be willing! http://youngwriterssociety.com/topic81141.html

Cheers,
Luxe :D
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