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Inside of a Star [Chapter Three]



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Tue May 03, 2011 10:29 pm
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Tue May 03, 2011 10:42 pm
Qoh16 says...



OMG!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! And i am so glad you posted some more!!! I can't wait for me. Keep writing so I can keep reading!!! XD
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Tue May 03, 2011 11:21 pm
Soulkana says...



Oh jeez this made me like WOAH!!! Haha Good job!! I hope you write more and keep up the good work. Truly epic I loved it. Can't wait for more and Happy Writing! May you receive many helpful reviews. Good luck and Hope you write more. Best of wishes and until later, Adios, Sayonara!!!!
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Wed May 04, 2011 9:19 pm
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OH MY GOSH IT IS EVEN BETTER THE SECOND TIME!!!!!!!! ;)
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Wed May 04, 2011 10:37 pm
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Haha this was better the second time around hahah!! Nice job and keep up the good works ^^ Happy Writing and Best of Wishes. No grammar I could spot but then I'm not a good person with grammar lol. So Until next time!!! Sayonara, adios, Good bye and Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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