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Tue Mar 27, 2018 6:16 pm
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manilla says...



Hi! I'm Manilla, and I will review your piece! Just read the info below and I'll be typing in no time.

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By content, I will not review...
Spoiler! :
-Politics
-Review
-Mature content (18+)
-Theatre


I also won't do chapter-by-chapter reviews unless I personally am invested in your story and have followed it from the beginning. At a time, I can do 3 chapters of a series. Also, if there are 3 or more reviews, I will decline to review because themes tend to get repetitive.

Another thing - I'm not on a consistent schedule for reviewing. All I can say is that it should take a week or two for your review to come in, and I'll drop a message in this thread to let you know I'm done. This is on a first-come-first-serve basis: I do reviews in order.

If your piece(s) follow(s) the rules, fill out this form of mine:


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Link to Piece:
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc):
Age rating:
Any other comments (Optional):


That's it. Looking forward for the requests and thanks for sticking with me!

-Manilla
Last edited by manilla on Mon Jun 03, 2019 10:03 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Sat Mar 31, 2018 7:09 am
Nobunaga says...



I will write just for you, Mani!
"Be the butthole" - Lareine, 2018
  





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Sat Mar 31, 2018 6:51 pm
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manilla says...



@Nobunaga

:)

YAY!
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When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 4:34 pm
eiaeh9 says...



Title of Piece: Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): Halfway between a short story and flash fiction
Any other comments: I am trying to make it fairly psychological so it would be great if you could mention your own personal emotional reaction if you want.
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 6:37 pm
manilla says...



@eiaeh9
WIll get to ASAP.
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Mon Apr 16, 2018 2:03 am
MasterAvi says...



Hey can you review the short introduction and chapter 1 of my prison escape book? Thanks :)
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1
  





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Sun Apr 29, 2018 7:44 pm
manilla says...



@MasterAvi

Oh my Geez, sorry, I didn't get to this! Once Review Day is over, I'll go review your work.
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Thu Jan 31, 2019 5:29 pm
manilla says...



Opening this up again...Send reviews!
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Thu Jan 31, 2019 9:15 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



You could review create.php?id=143333 if you want to!
Free reviews by Fanta! [Accepting!]

The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
  





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Thu Jan 31, 2019 9:55 pm
manilla says...



The link doesn't work...Could you try sending it again?
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:53 am
Fantascifi66 says...



Multi here, sorry :)
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The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
  





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Fri Feb 01, 2019 10:58 pm
manilla says...



Finished your review!
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Sun Feb 03, 2019 10:53 pm
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Liberty says...



Hi @manilla!

Can you review my short story? It's called Fairy Diary | Day 6. It's a dramatic fantasy. If you need anymore information, please ask me. :)

Thanks,

Liberty500
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Sun Feb 03, 2019 11:16 pm
manilla says...



Done! I hope it helps.
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Thu Feb 07, 2019 4:33 pm
Liberty says...



Hi @manilla!

Hope you're having a good day. Anyways, I just posted a poem, can you review it? It's pretty short. It's called Blacked Out.

Thanks,

Liberty500
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