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Wed Apr 29, 2015 9:54 pm
Omnom says...



Hey there! Welcome to my WRFF thread!

First off, before we start, let me explain how I review!
-I read as I review. This way you're getting my pure, unfiltered thoughts as I read. Sometimes, that means that something I commented or critiqued on is actually answered later on in the text. I may say as much in my review, but everything in my review is there for a reason, so it's still something to keep in mind.
-I place emphasis on the introduction. I love good intros, and I believe that a great intro can help a weak story, and a weak intro can severely damage an amazing story. So, expect a paragraph or two on your first paragraph or two :)
-I quote a lot. Sometimes it's just to tell you that you have a typo (not often) or it's to give specific examples to what I'm talking about.
-I tend to ramble. That's just how I do! I've tried to change it, but my reviews are very much unfiltered reactions and critiques to what I'm reading.
-I will have overall thoughts. This will be at the end of the review and it'll be an overview of some of my points in the review and a general feel of the story.
-I want to have a conversation! Most importantly, I feel, is my want to have my review be the beginning of a conversation, not the end. Reply to my review, PM me, invite me to a WFP. Let's talk about your story!It'll be a fun time.

Things I WILL Review

Spoiler! :
Short Stories
Novels - If you ask me to review a certain part of a novel, expect me to start at the beginning. So, just send me a link to the beginning. Also, expect it to take awhile.
Action/Adventure
General Fiction
Historical Fiction
Horror
Supernatural
Fantasy
Mythology
Science-Fiction


Things I MAY Review

Spoiler! :
Fanfiction - I won't review fanfiction I don't know
Works that are not proofread - My reviews aren't a spellchecker
Nonfiction


Things I WON'T Review

Spoiler! :
Romance
Poetry
Lyrics



My To-Do List!
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I would love feedback on my reviews, to let me know how I can improve on my critiques and comments! Thanks
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No romance? But Shrek is life; Shrek is love!
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Wed Apr 29, 2015 11:26 pm
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Need my novel reviewed... Trying to actually complete it but need to know if I need to edit it or not. Here's the beginning:
Walking Survival - Prologue
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Mon Aug 01, 2016 11:04 am
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This is open again!
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Tue Aug 02, 2016 3:41 am
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Hey there, could you please review:

Heroes of Aldrizhon (Prologue & Chapter 1)

Thanks in advance!

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Mon Sep 05, 2016 7:40 am
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The Last Light Companion [Chapter 1.1]

Please review that one. Thank you! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Fri Jan 13, 2017 5:53 am
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*Bump* this is back in business :D

I am trying for a review every three days, so I will try to get to these as fast as I can <3
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Mon Jan 30, 2017 7:00 pm
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I am looking for additional feedback on Voices of the Ice: Chapter 1

thank you very much.
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Tue Jan 31, 2017 6:55 am
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Done @tigeraye :D
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Thu Apr 06, 2017 7:27 pm
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Would like for you to review my "story"/letter - Letter to a dead girl.
  





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Mon Apr 17, 2017 3:09 am
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I apologize about the delay @shima but I will get right on that ^^
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Sat Nov 17, 2018 4:22 am
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Back open! Give meee works!
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Sat Nov 17, 2018 9:27 pm
Elinor says...



If you’d like I’d love for you to take a look at the first part of my short story.

Calumet (1)

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Wed Dec 12, 2018 8:45 am
Rascalover says...



Hey so I don't know if this is or isn't up your alley, but take a look and let me know??
Review please!
The Unfinished Diary of TBJ (Part 4)

Part three and four have no reviews, but I would be ecstatic if you reviewed all four parts!

If you need anything reviewed let me know!

Thanks!
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