Hey Yuri! I was wondering if you would mind reviewing a ROMANTIC SHORT STORY of mine, Almost. I have plans to submit it to a magazine, and want it to be in tip-top condition. Here's the link:
Hi Yuriiko! (: Would you please review this short story for me? I'm rather clueless as to how to improve it and I've seen your helpful reviews I'd be glad to repay the favour of reviewing any of your works, just inform me and I'll get straight to it! Thank you very much! ~Meep(:
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Hiyyaahh! It'd be totally awesome if you could review my poem Only if you want to, of course. It is kind of depressing... But I need to know if it sucks or not! And I need to know if other people can get the gist of it, too Here it is! viewtopic.php?t=73129 THANK YOUUU! xxx
Hullo I DO! I noticed that you still have your love for smilies intact. (not sure if you remember me though xD ) Would you review this piece for me?
Been working on it for a while it is the intro and first part of the first chapter (the whole of the first chapter will be like over 20 pages long so I'm just putting here the first part ) It is called Fear and it's General fiction and for now it's rated 12 + for language, though the following chapters will be from 12+ to 16+ to 18+ .
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