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Wed Dec 08, 2010 4:42 pm
BondGirl007 says...



Yuriyuriyuri here's something easy for you to do xD topic72951.html
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 1:22 pm
Yuriiko says...



Done!
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 4:13 pm
Sins says...



Would you mid reviewing this for me, Yuri?

topic72983.html

It's a short story of mine. A little sketchy... but hey. xD Please and thank you!
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:47 am
Yuriiko says...



Done, Sniks!
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:19 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey Yuri! '

Here: [url=http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=72937] Know I'm Here(2)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:42 pm
Yuriiko says...



Skins wrote:Would you mid reviewing this for me, Yuri?

topic72983.html

It's a short story of mine. A little sketchy... but hey. xD Please and thank you!


I'm done, Sniks. lol
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 7:05 pm
Angela says...



Hey Yuri! I was wondering if you would mind reviewing a ROMANTIC SHORT STORY of mine, Almost. I have plans to submit it to a magazine, and want it to be in tip-top condition. Here's the link:

viewtopic.php?t=72189

Thanks again!
*~!~* Angela
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:37 pm
Meep(: says...



Hi Yuriiko! (:
Would you please review this short story for me? I'm rather clueless as to how to improve it and I've seen your helpful reviews :P
I'd be glad to repay the favour of reviewing any of your works, just inform me and I'll get straight to it! :D
Thank you very much!
~Meep(:
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 4:05 pm
Emmzziee says...



Hiyyaahh!
It'd be totally awesome if you could review my poem :)
Only if you want to, of course. It is kind of depressing...
But I need to know if it sucks or not!
And I need to know if other people can get the gist of it, too :)
Here it is!
viewtopic.php?t=73129
THANK YOUUU! xxx
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Mon Dec 13, 2010 3:59 am
SilentRain says...



Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ...

Click on the link for more details...

viewtopic.php?t=72999

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:07 pm
Yuriiko says...



I am done! yay!
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Sun Dec 19, 2010 8:14 pm
BenFranks says...



Hullo. Mind having a butchers through this for me?

Cheers. :)
  





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Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:24 am
Yuriiko says...



done! :3
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Sat Dec 25, 2010 8:49 am
Yuriiko says...



no one wants to review from me? D:
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Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:31 am
Lord Anzius says...



Hullo :D I DO! :D I noticed that you still have your love for smilies intact. :D (not sure if you remember me though xD )
Would you review this piece for me? :)

Been working on it for a while it is the intro and first part of the first chapter (the whole of the first chapter will be like over 20 pages long so I'm just putting here the first part :P )
It is called Fear and it's General fiction and for now it's rated 12 + for language, though the following chapters will be from 12+ to 16+ to 18+ .

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69539.html#p763503

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