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Hi! I would really appreciate a review on my short story.

the after - 1/2




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Hello, I'm looking for feedback on my latest short story. Would you look over this?
Yolk's on Me (1).




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Any chance you could check out my chapter and review it to get it out of the Green Room? The Rage (Chapter 19)




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Alright, I'm all caught up again~
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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could you review my newest poem? if you come back
i'm probably listening to taylor swift.
can you tell i love pink?

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(previously harperlouise06 and lulon)




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I have a few poems I would like to have out of the Green Room, if you don't mind!

the solstice

i know why it's raining

Thank you! :D
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds




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... I will be revamping this now. Feel free to request a review c:
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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ooooo I've seen your reviews and I want one! This one probably isn't one of my favorite poems.... but it's been sitting in the green room for a while, so it'd be awesome if you could leave a review when you can! Blank Blank Blank
it is always another hand that guides me.




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Thank you for patiently waiting @avianwings47 ! I had a lot of fun reading your poem and I hope the review was helpful!! ^^
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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it's gay
it's poetry

i would love your feedback on it, if you've got time <3

my heart beats only for you

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]




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@Shady

I never got the chance to review this but I absolutely do love it and I think the changes you made are super great :>
name: key/string/perks
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novel: dream-ish (camp novmo '25)




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Hey there, Key, I hope you are having a nice time! :p

Can I request a review for the four chapters of my WIP novel "Nine"? It's alright if you aren't able to review all four of them, it would be great if you could just review The League of Life [Ch. IV, Nine]

It would be nice to get some comments on the characters, their interactions, and the plot. A rating out of five would be cool too.

P.S.: If you are not having a good time now, I hope you have some great time soon enough! :p
Yes, to dance beneath the diamond skies with one hand waving free,
Silhouetted by the trees, circled by the circus sands --
With all memories and fate, driven deep beneath the waves,
Let me forget about today until tomorrow...




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Hey @TheRebel2007 ! This sounds cool -- I'll start with chapter one this week. ^^
name: key/string/perks
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keystrings wrote:Hey @TheRebel2007 ! This sounds cool -- I'll start with chapter one this week. ^^

Thank you so much! :p
Yes, to dance beneath the diamond skies with one hand waving free,
Silhouetted by the trees, circled by the circus sands --
With all memories and fate, driven deep beneath the waves,
Let me forget about today until tomorrow...




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key it's not a published work but couls you perchance, enspoiler a rwview-like thing for my poem "untitled2" in my writers corner thread?
[soon, i will submit myself to the stars]



I cannot separate the aesthetic pleasure of seeing a butterfly and the scientific pleasure of knowing what it is.
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