Laure's linguistic liquorice shop of reviews

@Pompadour, I swear to god. I will get part two done ASAP.

@WritingWolf

Done!

I would be so grateful if you could take a look at one or both of my newest poems:

Untitled No. 1
absolution

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks so much!

@penprincess, I'd love to, before I do. Any specific areas you wish that I specifically look for? Plot? Grammar? Character development?

An overall review would be fantastic.

@penprincess.

Is TOTORO! <3333333333333

Reviews completed, sorry I couldn't say much.

That's totally alright! Thanks so much for your feedback.

If you ever need anything reviewed, let me know

Hello, Laure. Could you please review on my narrative/mystery novel? I've only posted the first chapter though-- I'm so insecure of posting the rest. A few reviewers have helped me out a lot, and even after I've fixed it up, i still feel as though it needs some repairing.
So please check it out : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110735
Thank you.

O_O I thought I had reviewed that, but I didn't! @Brunnera. I am so so so sorry, do you still want it reviewed or any other works of yours?

xD Oh it's okay, I'm not offended at all! Really its up to you whether you would like to or not. I'm okay with it.

Hi Laure! Would you mind taking a look at a chapter of mine? It is the second chapter, but you have reviewed the first when I origianlly published it, and I feel like I need some more feedback on it, especially plotwise. Be as harsh as you like! Thank you!

Could you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happenings?

@ire123, could you link it?

@TriSARAHtops, finished. Though that review was crappy as.

@Laure Unlikely happening