Laure's linguistic liquorice shop of reviews

I review

-poems

-short stories

-novels

I don't sugar coat my reviews, well maybe a little. I will give you my honest opinions on the content, grammar and characters and plot. Mostly on the content and the plot, things such as logical gaps, character development or the voice of your writing. That's the area I specialize in, but I can do grammar on request as well. But I'm no expert at it myself.

Hi! Milanimo here! Could you check out my new poem "Monsters in the Closet"? I really want some feedback and any criticisms are welcome! Thanks in advance!

I'm going to dare you to review one of my literary works, Aelita.
I would like some feedback on it... I want to improve.

Danke.

Challenge accepted, on my way.

@KindlingDragonsFire, done!

Hey Laure!

I have a poem here: the art of swallowing worlds

Thanks a mill

@Isha, done! Wonderful poem!

I was wondering if you could review this short of mine: Where Sad People Turn Into Flying Saucers

Thanks,
Un.

I'm looking for someone to review my Intro, I haven't written in a while and I think I could use some constructive criticism as well as feedback as to how it comes across to see whether I managed to do what I intended (plot critiques are good too despite the general lack of plot thus far, it's pretty short).

@Zarhail, finished,

@Unconsoled

FINISHED! x.x

You can come kill me later if you hated that very long review.

Heyo. Review this, please?
Elementarni - Chapter 1.1
Elementarni - Chapter One; Part 1.2
I'd appreciate it if you could leave some criticism on the flow/ character development/ pacing and such.
Thank yew!

Could you check out the prologue of my new novel? It's a pretty short one, and I'm not sure whether I want to change it or not. Azazel: Prologue

@queerelves, completed.

Could I please get My Darling reviewed?