Giving out free reviews!

I get bored a lot so I am here to review the I reviewed. I know how tiring it is waiting for a review so I put up this thread. Don't expect immediate answers though. I have a limited time space.

I won't review anything that

-has 4 reviews or up

-Fan fiction

-Poetry

Would greatly appreciate a review of my poem I Wish I Was Him http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106236

Part III "David" (of "Wallace Foster David")

Would love a review for this please...was slightly disheartened by the last.
think of its crafting as homage to the e.e cummings poetic philosophy...

You are both good and reviewed.

He could you review my prologue and my first chapter. It is long (i know) and I personally hate prologues but trust me, it gets interesting fast. I do ask that you maybe wait to review the context until you finish reading all of it. You'll see Anyway, thanks a ton.

The Necromancer: Prologue

Sorry... ignore this. I accidentally posted twice.

Do you mind reviewing my poem "On my Own?"

The link is here... http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106475

Hey there. I need both help and a review. I think you have to read it to help, so you get two birds with one stone.

I'm having trouble with tenses. Through the middle of the dialogue part, I change it from present to past. It should be an easy fix, but now I'm not sure which tense I should use. I really need to figure this out now, so it will save me a lot of extra work in the long run.

Quest Unable Chapter One (Rough Draft)

Thanks. ☺

I'd really appreciate it if you could review my poem: "Seas within shells."

Seas within shells

Thank you so much!

I would love if you could review this poem for me:

They Fall, Themselves

Thank you!

I got you neo

Got you mystery

Short, pomp, and Beth you are reviewed

Hi, could you review my short story: The Keys to Silence Are Black and White
Thanks

Oh please please please! I'll love you forever!
Stained Glass Life
Thanks!