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I really should have checked my WRFF much earlier. xD I'll try and get them all done today!

Done so far:

Skins (I'll review the next chapters after I finish these requests :D )
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work.php?id=98178 this please, and if you get the time, I'd just like a little feedback on this please: work.php?id=98150
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When you have the time :D

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Hai, Blues! If you could review this it'd be much appreciated! :)

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Oh wow. It's been forever since I remembered this and since I reviewed. You guys will be my guinea pigs while I try and remember how to review. Like the oil on a rusty machine. :twisted:




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Hey Blues,

CAN you review this for me please.

Thanks.




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Blues if could review this it would be great!

work.php?id=98328

Thanks much! :)
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work.php?id=98362 :D
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Hey all! I have a lot of school work at the moment so I might take slower than usual to finish the reviews. I intend to have them done by this week though ^^




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Hellow:) I sincerely hope I won't be putting too much work on you if I request this to be read: work.php?id=98441#c341175
Thanks so much! (if there's anything that needs to be reviewed, ask!)
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Done! :) Who's next?

(Polinka, I reviewed chapter two and I'm off to review the rest :D)




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I posted this a few months ago, but I'm just starting to revise it now. If you have the time to review it, I'd really appreciate it!

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Done! (A few days ago though)




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Hi Blues!

This is an extract, so it's ok if you'd rather not review it, but my concerns are about the effectiveness of this one scene, and it shouldn't matter too much that you've not read the rest. But if it does, then that's cool. :)

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