This is the first chapter of my novel (edited version split into two parts). You recently reviewed the prologue for me (which was great btw) and this is what comes next.
I should warn you though, it is not a direct continuation of the previous part (Four new characters, new time period and such).
I don't know if that is enough material for your review challenge, but it's all I have! I hope you enjoy it.
When I was young I used to have problems finishing my sentences, but now I
Hey Blues, I'm going to be a pain in the butt and request some of your awesomeness.
Could you check out my latest novel for me? I have three chapters up so far, but you can read/review as much or as little as you want because the thought of reading three might make you want to run into a window.
Would very much like a review of my short fantasy/adventure fiction piece The Rather Odd Adventures of Daisy Vol 1 Please and Thank You work.php?id=97126
Hey! Would love a review if you'd be so kind ( Or have time, either one ^^, ) work.php?id=97530 It's a single chapter, the first in fact to a story. If you get round to it I hope it floats your boat
One of the things I love about YWS is the quote generator. For example, I'm reading a really serious work, and then I see "Moo. - cow" at the bottom of the page. — Darlet
