The Most Awesome Story Ever

Hahahaha dude, all I have to say is how awesome this is. I'm like number 38, by the way! This was hilarious and made my day.

--Lollipopper, reporting after doing a useless review that just agrees with all the awesome reviews before it.

This is just, oh my God, so beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes.
You are an incredible writer.

Well, that be awesome.

What a sweet little ending. It's just a cute, funny little drabble. No concrit, just saying that it's awesome

Okay Mike, I concede. 'liked' - It would be rude not to!

Something funny and light. Not the best piece of work as it isn't as well structured as a normal story. It is also a bit short, but I guess that's expected in a work like this. It would be interesting to read about the life of Mr. and Mrs. Awesome. Also, a continuation of the usage of I before am in Ms. Awesome's description of herself would of been good.
I like the light hearted feel of this story but am slightly disappointed by the basic structure and lack of depth in the story as I have read better works from you.

Something funny and light. Not the best piece of work as it isn't as well structured as a normal story. It is also a bit short, but I guess that's expected in a work like this. It would be interesting to read about the life of Mr. and Mrs. Awesome. Also, a continuation of the usage of I before am in Ms. Awesome's description of herself would of been good.
I like the light hearted feel of this story but am slightly disappointed by the basic structure and lack of depth in the story as I have read better works from you.

Omg...This is totally flipping AWESOME!! You Used Awesome in almost every sentence and still made it sound cool!! At first I thought this was going to be a I-Feel-Like-Writing-Something-But-I-Really-Dont-Care-What type of story but it turned really cool!

This was awesome. I love the story of awesome, it would make a really good short film...

I hate to be the downer, but I didn't like it too much =[. Your grammar and punctuation didn't have any noticeable errors. And your sentence structure in general was nice. But the story line... I realize its supposed to be funny, but I just didn't. Laugh. Sorry =[ I like a lot of your other works, but this isn't among my favorites.

Great job on your sentence structures, really well done on that =]

LO frickin L

Now then. I am utterly disgusted that even after all these comments, no-one has picked up on the GINORMIC flaw in this piece. It truly sets my veins afire with rage when I read it, and all the comments afterwards. I simply cannot believe that no-one picked up on your horrendous repetition of the word awesome! I honestly thought I was going to- LOL JOKES! This was hilarious, it really brightened up the prospect of reviewing another however many people today. Thank you so much!

This would make the cutest children's book, I think. I loved this, it was cute and funny at the same time, even though at first glance I thought it would be annoying. Wonderful job.

This story is the bomb! I didn't expect much from it when I first started reading, but, when I read on, it was humorous and interesting. I like the moral of the story as well. Two thumbs up from me!

Chuckles. This story had me smiling and laughing the whole way through. When I read the title and saw you name underneath it, I'll be honest, I rolled my eyes and thought 'yep thats mike alright. I'd reconize the lack of modesty any where.' Then, of course, I clicked on it. I'm not sure what I expected, but it sure wasn't this story. I was pleasently surprised.
One of my favorite part is when he is challenged about his awesomeness and you have him 'strike a pose'. Funniest showdown ever.
Anyway, I enjoyed this lighthearted piece. You never fail to amaze me with your ability to go from writing a serious,gut wrenching novel like Animal, to a crazy, funny short story like this. Way to go!
Write on. ~ DG

I digged it man. It was pretty good, but I think like everyone, the work isn't very serious. It's a good piece, but I just don't know how serious we can all take it. It's good for a few laughs, but after that where does it take us? I like how you use some archetype tropes in the piece, but none of them are yours solely. It's good to see such an entertaining short story, but in the end I can't help but feel there isn't much to be gained from this piece. Maybe this is a fable of sorts, but I really wouldn't consider it literary short fiction. It is more in the mix of a fable.