I'm not sure about the ending of this in particular, but help with any of it is really appreciated.
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Our barbed tongues worried away at old grudges,
dug into putrid flesh and picked away
at the crimson heads of fresh scabs;
we squawked over a mess of mangled carcass,
wolfed down that one last juicy morsel
before we chewed monotonously
on regurgitated scraps of old gossip.
You, an effigy of a corpse,
straw limbs hanging by a thread,
droplets leaked from a ragged pinprick
forced through by our bitter hands –
your pain was a release for waves of acidity that
crashed and burned on red-raw wounds.
Now, voices stifled by the hand of chastisement,
we confine ourselves to whispering resentments
that flush with shame and stutter into
loath-tinged silences.
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Thanks in advance!
Amy
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