Reviews a-la-Vampyre (Not Accepting)

Hey guys!
Obviously, I'm here to review for all you lovely writers out there!

I will review:

Poems

Artwork

Photography

All Short Stories (for grammar and spelling mistakes only, I'm just no good at reviewing the actual stories, sorry)
If I see a short story I particularly like, I may have a go at reviewing it.

In SOME cases novels, see below for details!


My style!
I can be nice, but also harsh if I think something really isn't working, or is cliché. I will pick up on and tell you exactly about everything and everything I think needs improving, and I'm a stickler for grammar/spelling.
Don't be deceived by my lack of badges, I try to always give decent-length and helpful reviews!

Please don't be offended if I say anything harsh, I promise you it will all be constructive.


Novel reviewing!
If you're starting a novel and would like someone to review it all the way through, PM me with a general idea of the genre/plot, and a sample of your novel, and if I like it, I will proofread and edit it all the way through for you.

1 spot open for novel reviewing!
1. SilentRain -Novel
2.

I have no problem reviewing 18+ works.

If you'd like some examples of my reviews, click on any of these:

Poems:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post788757.html#p788757
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post788370.html#p788370
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post788596.html#p788596
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post790914.html#p790914

Novel Chapters:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post792342.html#p792342

Artwork/Photography:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post792653.html#p792653

Let the reviewing begin in earnest!
Vampyre


Review list:
SilentRain - Alas, The Teacher is Dead - Finished.
SilentRain - Novel Prologue - Finished.
Crimsona - Threadbare - Finished.

*How do I delete this post!*

Well, I guess I'm the first to ask for a review,
Well, this --> topic72690.html
Is a poem.

Thanks

~Rain~

What's this? No one wants a review? O_O

Hello, so, this is my first attemp at writing a novel, so far all I have is the prologue and I wrote that today, I wrote it and then edited it, but I still need help, please tell me what you think.

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^^ The link

Thanks,

~Rain~

SilentRain, your review is done! Any more, for any more?
'Pyre

Hey im a writing a novell where the main character is a vampire. I dont have it finished so im putting it up here in parts. if you could read it that would make me very happy. its Called The Zenith

Ok, could I please have a link?

No one wants a review? Not one soul out there thinks their piece needs critiquing?? *is shocked*

Hello there, can you review my poem for me please?

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Thanks,

~Crim

...And, you're done! Anyone else?

Hello there, Vampyre! ^_^

I was wondering if you could review the first chapter of my NaNo for me. As a warning, it's only been minimally edited so far, but I ran through at least five times with spell-checker. XD I'd like another opinion or two (or possibly more ) on how the story begins and how I can improve. The genre is mix between fantasy and action/adventure.

Oh, and by the way, the link is here:
Against All Odds Chapter One

(Technically it's my prologue, but it's rather long, and one reviewer said it seemed to jump right into the action instead of being like a prologue explaining thingy...but whatever. XD)

Thanks in advance!

Sure! It's fairly long so may take me a little while, but I'll get right on it
I've looked over it - looks like a pretty good story!
'Pyre

When you have the time, could you review this for me, Pyre?

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It's the first chapter of a novel. I've just re-edited it, so I'd like to get some new opinions on it. Please and thank you!

~ Skins

If you have some time, could you please look at this poem?
Sorry to bombard you- I know you have other open requests. Feel free to take as long as you please.

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Thanks so much!

-Coral-