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Hi!
I was wondering if you could review my story, topic74886.html
It's for school so comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you so much!

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DONE!

bring it all people!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Please :D


I might have something else in a couple of minutes if that's alright :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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That too please :)

THANKIES!!!!! :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Gotcha girl... is it OK if I do this on Review Day? :D One day isn't much of a diff, right? :D
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Hey! Jash

Please review this- topic87266.html#p912384
It's the edited version of the new novel I'm working on, about which I was talking to you earlier...

Thanks!!!!

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Checkout the different shades of sunset...
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Done. =)
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Hey There Jash,

I would be honored if you swing on over and check this little adventure story I just cooked up. It is not yet finished but is looking to become the first story I've ever brought to completion, I would love it if you would review its progress so far:

topic87101.html#p911137

and if you feel inclined to and have the time I would be equally honored if you would review on of my poems as well:

topic87536.html#p914419

They are not quite what one would call impressive but, in my opinion, have potential, the kind of potential that only a well constructed review can bring out in a story,

Thanks in advance,

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I'll see what I can do. =))
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Thanks soooo much for the review JASK! XD XD XD




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You're welcome! But I'm still trying to find the time to review the prose one. =)) I'll get to it, kay? =D
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Kay! Its cool, take your time...technically its not even finished yet -_- :wink:




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I'll try my best to do it today. XD For review day. LOL
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Hey jash, since you say...topic88067.html
The moment you say that one set of moral ideas can be better than another, you are, in fact, measuring them both by a standard, saying that one of them conforms to that standard more nearly than the other. C. S. Lewis

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Hey. I have been writing this novel for a while and I've just edited all the chapters I have posted and I will add a couple of new chapters and I would like someone to review it from the beginning.
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Thanks, I would really appreciate it!!
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