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Jashael
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Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:46 pm
Jashael says... · Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:46 pm
FINALLY DONE AT LAST.

Who's next? :)
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Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:10 am
PiesAreSquared says... · Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:10 am
I'm next....viewtopic.php?t=74186
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Wed Jan 05, 2011 6:01 am
Jashael says... · Wed Jan 05, 2011 6:01 am
Done! :) who's next? =D
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Wed Jan 05, 2011 7:38 am
Light_Devil! says... · Wed Jan 05, 2011 7:38 am
Me? *twiddles fingers together* Ummm, I'm not really writing this story anymore... but it never got any reviews, so I was wondering if... ^^" Could you review it, please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73225
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Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:49 am
Jashael says... · Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:49 am
Light_Devil! wrote:Me? *twiddles fingers together* Ummm, I'm not really writing this story anymore... but it never got any reviews, so I was wondering if... ^^" Could you review it, please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73225


Oh sure, so I'll review the second chapter? or the first one. :)
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Thu Jan 06, 2011 3:59 am
liquiddeath says... · Thu Jan 06, 2011 3:59 am
Wow, your like the review doctor XD i wanted you to review my piece but its under construction so yeah.
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Thu Jan 06, 2011 4:04 am
Jashael says... · Thu Jan 06, 2011 4:04 am
liquiddeath wrote:Wow, your like the review doctor XD i wanted you to review my piece but its under construction so yeah.


Oh, I hope I can be a Review Doctor. :) I hope I can actually give out remedies, y'know? Haha...anyway, please do come back if you want me to review you. :) Thanks!
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Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:41 pm
Yuriiko says... · Thu Jan 06, 2011 2:41 pm
Hey Jashy!

Will you review my entry for Skin's contest? Here's the magical link: topic73574.html

Thanks in advance. :D
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Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:35 pm
bookworm27 says... · Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:35 pm
Hey! I'm new here, and wanted to know if you'd be willing to review my "Of Mice and Men" essay preferably, but you could review the other piece if you'd rather! Thanks so much for the offer! I appreciate it a lot!
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Fri Jan 07, 2011 11:25 pm
ErBear says... · Fri Jan 07, 2011 11:25 pm
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Thanks!!!!

(PS- this story is told completely through my main character Anna's view. I'm also trying to work in flashbacks to add more detail... they're a little rough.)

Thanks again!

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Sat Jan 08, 2011 1:40 pm
Light_Devil! says... · Sat Jan 08, 2011 1:40 pm
Second one, please... D: I thought that was the link I gave you.
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Thu Jan 13, 2011 12:19 pm
Jashael says... · Thu Jan 13, 2011 12:19 pm
Got it! I'll get to it ASAP. :)
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Thu Jan 13, 2011 12:21 pm
Jashael says... · Thu Jan 13, 2011 12:21 pm
Got it! I'll get to it ASAP. :)
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Fri Jan 14, 2011 5:53 am
Loller65 says... · Fri Jan 14, 2011 5:53 am
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73190

I'd sure appreciate it if you'd review my dramatic poem "Poem" for me!
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Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:51 pm
MiaParamore says... · Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:51 pm
Hey Jashy. I need your help on Turning the Tables(1.1). I would probably re-write it once I get the hang of the story. I mean, when I get further in it.
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