Hey, can you do my second chapter? I have a summary of the first one in the post, so you don't have to read the first one. It's pretty stand alone for right now though. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71133
Is it all right if I do your guys's reviews on reviewing Sunday?
It's just that they'll motivate me to actually participate properly and help out. I hope you guys don't mind waiting an extra day or so... But If you want me to get to your requests sooner, let me know!
Also, I'm more open than I've ever been for reviews right now. I need some help for reviewing Sunday! Therefore... hit me!
EDIT: Ignore that post.
I thought that reviewing Sunday was two days away... as you do, so no one will have to wait an extra day or anything. It's a win-win situation! I still want you guys to hit me with requests though...
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Would you mind reviewing viewtopic.php?t=71025 for me? It's the fairly tame prelude/prologue to my high fantasy novel. The second part of it's posted too!
As a bribe, I was thinking about:
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Then I realized that all that sugar could possibly give Bolt an edge on you, so I figured you'd prefer:
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Thank you!
I don't fangirl. I fandragon.
Have you thanked a teacher lately? You should. Their bladder control alone is legend.
This please Skins! :http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic71660.html Thanks in advance!
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
My story is an unfinished first chapter, very short. I want to know if I have any gramatical errors or if I have run-on sentances. I also want to know if it's a good story, or if it flat out sucks. T_T Humm, well it describes everything on the thread. :D
Please and thank you! ^_^
Also, what my story needs work on and what I could fix and take out and what not. Anything you can possibly think of, be picky! :D
"Do not try to be pretty. You weren't meant to be pretty; you were meant to burn down the earth and graffiti the sky. Don't let anyone ever simplify you to just 'pretty'" — Suzanne Rivard
