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Could you please review this? It's not too long:
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Your review is done Stela. Ask me if you want some more.
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A war parody of Twilight. :twisted:

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It's a sequel really. You may have seen the first piece, Hunting Death featured on the front page. :P
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Sorry I can't. It's rated 18+. Anyone interested? I don't bite( sorry for copying this line from someone).
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Anyone for a review??? Don't make me beg.
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Doesn't anyone want a review?
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Please review this link:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post676473.html#p676473

It is chapter 5 i SHades of Violet. Hopefully you are already fimiliar with the story. Thanks!
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