Since you're desperate- here's an oldie I'd like some more criticism on... the thing is, I don't really...uh...know how to...uh...give you...uh... link...uh... it's in Other Poetry and it's called "Dawn".^^
"Don't say 'the old lady screamed'- bring her on and let her scream." -Mark Twain
Writing is like traveling- you never know what's going to happen until you get there.
However, please post a link in your post, it is more conventional. Also, search for the "Links" thread (it's either in The Lounge or The Information Desk, not sure which) and it will tell you how to edit links like my signature.
I have another story for you to review! It's 6K+ words and it mentions Aimee Cullen. I'll post a link. Here it is. Hope you like it! post626369.html#p626369
Sometimes two people fall apart to realize how much they need to fall back together.
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