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Hi! I finally decided to "up my game" and all that jazz, and get off my behind and do some serious reviewing! I'm a gentle reviewer, focusing largely on grammar and spelling, and I will not seriously diss your poem!

I would prefer to review:
Poetry, preferably "Other", and not too long: no epics!

Anything else, eg Fanfics, by request only: I specialise in Harry Potter and Twilight.

In return for my services, I ask you simply one thing.
Read Luminescence. It's my Twilight fanfic, located, somewhat obviously, in the Fanfiction section. Please read at least part one, or all seven parts if you want to make a go of it, and leave a review. It will be much appreciated!
You scratch my back, I'll scratch yours!

Just post a link to your work, and I will review it ASAP and reply on here when it's done (ie I will say "DONE") If I have quite a few reviews to do, I will make a list, eg:
So-and-so: DONE
So-and-so: DONE
So-and-so: DONE

OK?
I'm ready and waiting!

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Guys, I don't bite.

C'mon!
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Hey! I don't have what I need reviewed up yet, but when I do, I'll be the first I guess! I'll post the link up here when the story is up. Just to make sure, a fantasy story is fine, right?

I'll go review that fanfic right away. I used to be a huge fan of twilight, but now not so much. But I'll still review it. :D

See you later!

~ Trish :smt006
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Well, I've never done Fantasy before, or really read any, put I'll give it a shot!
And thanks for the review!

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This is the latest edited version of the story.Wanted to know if it was complete:

topic51881.html
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Young gun... done.
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I just posted the first part of a story. It's not the same one that I was talking about earlier. This one will be much shorter than that one will be. But here's the link to the first part:

topic53863.html

Thanks so much in advance!

~ Trish :smt006
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Thank you.
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Trish ->> will read now, review later, when I have a little more time. Promise!
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Trish ->> done!

Sorry about the delay: I went on holiday.
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Can you review my poem Me & My Friends? No one has written a review for it yet.
Sometimes two people fall apart to realize how much they need to fall back together.




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Sure, send over the link and I'll get right on it :)
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Here it is:
viewtopic.php?t=51353
Sometimes two people fall apart to realize how much they need to fall back together.




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AlphaGirl01 ->> done!
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Anyone want a review? I don't bite, and I'm getting a little bored!

The entertainment value of thumb-twiddling has worn off!

Mia x
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