The Rebellion

*sorry it took me so long to reply*

Adam

I could here the crackling of a fire and opened my eyes. I was in a clearing and a fire was burning a girl was staring deep into its flames.

"well they've certainly done up the prisons since I was last in one" I said sarcastically.

"thanks for saving me love" I said and started to walk off.

"wait so I save your life and then all I get is a thanks" the girl said standing up.

"yeah dear thats all you get but if you really have to my names Adam Hark yours."

"Aliya" the girl said and I nodded. then I realised I she had saved my life so I went and sat back down with her.

Aliya

Adam came back to the fire.

"Forget your way home?" Aliya asked. She didn't meet his eyes, she just stared into the fire. She didn't want to trust him, even though she felt as if she could.

"I'm not exactly popular back in the village." he answered.

Aliya laughed softly, remembering half a dozen soldiers chasing after him. "You don't say?"

"So what about you?" He changed the subject. "Why don't you just go home. You didn't have to save me, and you certainly don't have to hang around here with me now."

"I was coming this way anyways." Aliya told him.

"And why is that?"

Aliya looked him in the eyes. "You ask too many questions."

She stood and started walking away from the fire.

"Where are you going?" he asked.

"Well you do want food don't you?"

*Rosalind*

Now finally. There was someone I could trust.

Aliya and Adam jumped up at the same second when a branch snapped beneath my feet, ready to fight if necessary.

"Hello Aliya and Adam." I said casually and walked towards the fire although Aliyas position didn't relax.

"Hello Rosalind. What are you doing in the deepest parts of the forest this late?" Adam asked sitting back down.

"I am here because I know something, something important. I'm not really sure whats going to happen, but I'm looking for someone who could know and is trustworthy."

"Well shouldn't you know whats going to happen? Isn't that kind of your job?"

"I know you have no respect for my job whatsoever, but you should. I see dark clouds hanging over your live. It will be your decision that will drive you to your downfall. And there is only one way to change your fate. But I have to get going now. Good bye you two. And Aliya? Watch your back."

I moved on swiftly. As I briskly walked away from the fire. I could hear them wondering about my words.

Arya - your character or any of the other characters WITH THE EXCEPTION OF THOSE WHO ARE WITH EBBA cannot know that Ebba or Jarin is alive.

So can you please edit that one part of your post out?

Jap I will.

Thanks.

Hiya! Is it too late to join? Oh, please tell me it's not Lol I know it's random XD

Lemme know!

Absolutely not!

Huzzah! Lol okey dokey Here we go:

Name: Demeter Asana

Age: 19

Station: Outcast. She was caught stealing by a group of guards, for which the punnishment is usually death, but at the time, she was under 18 so she was let off with an exile instead.

Appearance: http://peachysticks.deviantart.com/art/ ... 1-17335110 Only, she has green eyes, not blue, and her dress looks like this: http://chrisbronze.deviantart.com/art/E ... s-19740716 Same colors; black and white. She doesn't wear shoes

Personality: Demeter is very flirty, but she's smart and clever. She's quick witted and is very good at getting herself out of a tight spot. She's friendly, fun, and lively. She lives life to the fullest, and is a good and loyal friend. She'd do anything to take down Kenzel and get her revenge on him.

History: Demeter was left to fend for herself at 15 when her parents died of natural causes. She had to steal to feed herself and was finally caught for it at 17. As she was not old enough to meet the death penalty, she was thrown out of the town, and she vowed to get her revenge on Kenzel. She's been wandering fields near the town, but making sure to keep a good distance away.

Magical Item: A choker given to her by her mother that holds untold power. It's black silk with a black diamond pendant.

Other: Up for love

I'll post a story tomorrow, because I have to go to bed now

Nighty-night

Aliya

The fortune teller, Roslind, was long gone but her words stuck in Aliya's head. Watch your back.

"That Roslind is really a crack up isn't she?" Adam laughed and started stripping the fur of a rabbit the two had caught. (Yeah..I'm pretending they got some hunting in before Roslind appeared).

"I suppose." Aliya said. She still couldn't shake the warning from her head.

"I've never had any faith in fortune tellers." Adam continued. "All they are is a scam."

The sound of sticks cracking and rustling in the bushes came from behind us. Aliya spun around and waited tensely to find whoever was coming.

Watch your back, Aliya

I really like the beginning of your story. Its very creative. While looking over it i didn't find anything wrong grammar wise, but then my editing skills are not the highest.

Then only thing I found that was a little odd was the arrangement you set up. You told part of the story and then told what was going on. Its not bad at all. I just never seen it that way before, and it is actually good because it pulls in a reader to continue.

Randomwriter your new so I can see why you would think this is just another thing to reveiw, it isn't this is a story book it's were a lot of writers get together to write for a plot made by one person.

**Randomwriter, welcome to YWS! ;D
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Jarin

He staggered through the forest, eyes peeled for a glimpse of the princess's dress. He had told her to find firewood about an hour ago, and certainly it seemed that still she was not back. He couldn't help but feel a paranoid feeling settle over him that something had happened and he searched the forest deeper.

The searches through the forest has been picking up pace lately, for longer spans at a time. It seemed to be harder and harder to evade Kenzel's warriors in their ever going search for both of them. It did not help that if one of the civilians caught sight of him, they would call the authorities making it even harder to get away from them. His worst fear at this moment in time was that she was found by one of these searches for both of them did not know when and where they would take place.

He had left his horse back at camp, along with the dwindling fire that would be dead by the time he had gotten back, that is if he ever got back. But to his mild surprise, he saw the glint of fire through the trees, most likely a clearing in which it sat. At first Jarin thought he may have been walking in circles, but as soon as he saw the people around the fire he automatically knew it was otherwise. He pulled out his sword and crept closer and closer, hiding behind trees and bushes so that he would not be seen.

If he hadn't been so successful at hunting, then Jarin doubted that he would be able to creep through the forest unnoticed, with barely a sound. But almost simultaneously as he thought this thought, he stepped on a branch and it cracked loudly, sounding above the crackling of the fire and the rustling of the tree's leaves.

A person leapt to there feet and seemed to almost peer directly at him, through the dark forest. Sighing heavily, he knew he had no choice. It would be foolish to run back to camp and verify that he was actually there, then to just go forth and to claim he wasn't who he really was. Straightening up, he walked into the clearing, his silver sword glinting menacingly in the fire light.

To his relief it was only two people, not even wearing the grabs of Kenzel's warriors. They were but mere peasant folk even if they may hold property. The other one dropped the rabbit and got to his feet, eyeing Jarin inquistively. The one who was already standing turned out to be a beautiful girl.

"Hello there." Jarin said waving lightly with his one hand. "I saw your fire and I was just wondering if you have seen a girl anywhere around here, about yeh tall? Kenzel wishes to find her immediately." He gestured Ebba's height with his hand. The only reason why he had said he was on Kenzel's business because even if they had thought they had recognized him, they would automatically think they were mistaken.

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xD
I forgot I was in this eh?
~Incognito

Sorry this took so long!

Demeter-

I walked along the bank of a calmly flowing river, kicking up a little bit of sand as I walked. I watched the little clouds of sand fly up in front of me. The water rose every few minutes or so, dampening my feet as it did. I lifted my head and directed it towards the cloudless sky, closing my eyes, inhaling the crisp air.

After a bit, I sat down on the bank and watched the water flow. It was entrancing, really. I pulled my knees up to my chest and rested my chin on them. I hugged my legs tightly and closed my eyes again. Suddenly, I heard leaves rustling from somewhere behind me. I stood quickly and looked towards the sound.

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Sorry it's so short. Anyone can jump in

~Rayne

Rosalind

I had been walking for a long time already, when i could see the end of the Forest.

After meeting Adam and Alya i didn't encounter anyone anymore.

I was getting tired, and i badly needed a rest, so i walked towards the river at the end of the Forest.

I didn't see anyone was seated there. That's why I was startled when I heard a voice.

***I'm sorry. I cant seem to find your Profile RayneChild, So I just invented something***