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The Outcasts

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Should we start over? Only vote if you are part of the storybook please!

yes! i am lost
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No! I think we are doing fine
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I don't Care
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Following the Kylie girl and the rest of the group into the tunnels leading downwards, I smirked at how perfectly unused this was. A perfect get away route for a personal mission. The lights were lit dimly and the group fumbled along the slippery floor.

"Robin and Jack will want us to go the second base if anywhere," I stated plainly and a fe people nodded thier heads.

"Oi," I directed it towards Kylie "We need to get to the middle of the forest." I smiled and we headed there.

The Evan whom I had met for an estimate of at least two minutes waved at us and Robin opened the bush. I smiled and jumped through the abyss of the drama. I ran and flicked the lights on as the others funneled in.

"Couldn't be homey-er" I smiled at the group as they awkwardly gathered to sit on the benches. Evan's hair whitened and I took short notice. I looked through the supplies to unpack. I pulled out a broom and a few cloths, walking to the small kitchen I started sweeping and cleaning everything. I hummed and our small group looked at me funny.

"Family Force 5" I said plainly keeping my eyes on my work.

"what are you doing?" Robin asked a bit amused.

"Humming," I wiped my forehead wiping a smudge of dust on my forehead, "So whats the plans cap'ns" I asked continuing with my work.
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"Yeah, I know," Kayla chuckled. "Maybe we should go look around? Maybe find some things to eat or something...or maybe some people."
"Can't stop, won't stop. I must be dreaming."




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Kale- Power: Electric current down her arms

"I think that's a good idea. I'm so tired of being alone!" Kale groaned and then smiled at Kayla again. "Which way do you want to head?"
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Anyone wanna bring me in? *Is lost*
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Kayla smiled, "Maybe that way?" She pointed towards a trail the went straight through the forest. "Looks like people have been there since the grass is all pushed down."
"Can't stop, won't stop. I must be dreaming."




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jok101 wrote:*hope this is okay me posting another character I'm not gonna really play him but I thought a bad Outcast might be nice*

Name: unknown is labeled as priority one in the files Jack has

age:19 [well he looks it at least]

Powers:[last time they ran into him theirs a lot he's kind of a god character but I'm not really gonna use him you know only when well when I fell like it anyone and everybody can play him but he's bad so he wants to kill any other mutants] Telekinesis, super strength, flight, fire balls and super sight

appearance: long scruffy hair, jeans and a black coat

personality: cold and heartless

history: has always felt special with his powers but when he found out their were others with powers he stopped feeling special so has set out to kill them all so he can once again feel special once more

other: he was the guy from my first post that tried to kill Jack


Doesn't he have a few too many powers...? Like he has five.
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*yeah I know he supposed to anyone can play him I was just thinking bad guy has to be good*




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Dropping out, for good. I'm lost and no one seems to be bringing me in.
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the discussion forum is there for a reason and you should bring your self in.




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Kylie

I climbed in to the strange enterance to the hideout. It was dusty and seemed as if it hadn't been used in a very long time.

I sat on some realtively sturdy benches and listened to our presumed leaders speak.
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As the three of them slowly made their way towards the hideout, he had that feeling you get when you absolutely know that something bad is bound to happen. Jay looked at them suspiciously, then sighed, seeing that they didn't have the same suspicion. They passed several trees through the forest, luckily not running into anyone yet. He yawned.

When they finally arrived, Jay made his way into the secret doorway first. He climbed in, walking down the stone steps. He sat on a bench in the center of the room, waiting to meet the other arrivals.

*I think we should vote for a "leader" in the discussion thread*
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Kylie

I watched others attempt to clean up, and by attempt i mean they stirred dust around and made things worse.

"I need some air." I said to no one in particular.

I climbed out of the hideout and breathed deeply.

I heard rustling in the bushes. I turned to face it and changed into one of my aliases: a little blonde girl with bright blue eyes.

"Who's there?" I asked, a little suprised by the youth in my voice. I hardly used this alias.

"Two lost hikers in the forest." A tall girl with her hair pulled into a ponytail said.

Another girl was with her. "What is a little girl like you doing in the woods all alone?" she asked.

"Walking." I relpied.

The two wispered something to eachother.

"Come here." the tall one extended her arm. "We'll help you get home."

I cautiously took her hand, it would be out of character if I didn't/

"Ouch!" something had shocked me.

"Sorry!" the tall girl said.

"Kale!" the other shouted.

I shifted back to Kylie. "You're outcasts too."

The were a little shocked that I wasn't a little girl anymore.

"Come on, we've got a lot of others in this dusty old hideout." I led them through the bush entrance. Frowning a little at the prospect of not being able to breathe again.
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"That was so cool what you just did," Kayla said to the girl. "What's your name anyways?"

"Kylie," she replied and led them through more bushes.

*By the way, that's so weird that it's Kayla, Kale, and Kylie. I just think that's funny.*
"Can't stop, won't stop. I must be dreaming."




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hey guys just thought id tell you that i broke my wrist and wont be able to post for a bit, but i am leaving it up to you to keep it going
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"Hey, sorry I shocked you, Kylie. I'm just defensive..." Kale apologized. "So, where exactly are you leading us to?"
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