Young Writers Society

*would you like someone to temporarily take care of Robin?*

Kylie

"Well some of these other outcasts I recently met up with have this hudeout out here" I explained. "We were at a different one but some government agents broke in. Whoever is in charge is pretty confidant that they won't be able to find this one."

Neither girl replied to that.

I finally reached the entrance and pulled the steel door open.

"In we go." I said. "But let me warn you, it's dusty."

And down we climbed into the hideout.

"Hey, I found two more." I announced as I entered.

Someone I couldn't identify came over and started explaining and introducing, so I stepped out of the way.

I coughed and reclaimed my place on one of the dusty benches.

Kale

"Woah..." Kale breathed as her eyes took in the shelter. She looked at Kayla, her eyes wide. Someone began to explain everything to her, but she could scarcely focus.

When the person was done explaining Kayla whispered to Kale, "Can you believe this? Who knew that we'd all be in one place?"

I'm gonna drop out, sorry.

Why would you drop out? And i can write a bit and will be on whenever i can,but you can make robin do whatever you think will suit her.

(Why drop out? We're going to need as many characters as we can, especially males seeing as most are females)

people can start adding characters whenever they want, but only two characters per person.

okay I'll stay

thank you

"I know," Kale whispered back. "It's unbelievable!"

Okay I think we should start eliminating the ability to post a single sentence. They are to short.

Kylie

I stayed on the bench until someone threw a broom at me.

"Help." they stated.

Okay, whatever. I couldn't tell who they were through the cloud of dust.

I started sweeping piles of dust and someone came through with a dust pan.

Suddenly a huge gust of air blew through the room, taking all the dust out the hideout door.

"Whoa." I said and looked towards the source.

A boy stood in the back with a satisified smile on his face.

Jack

Robin phoned me and told me that she'd found Jay. I told her I was going to buy a comic. Not just any comic the creator was a Outcast, while he thought he was having an idea really he was just seeing are future.

I walked into the store and walked to the desk.

"do you have a new copy of The Outcast " I asked he noodded

"I tell you it's a shoker" he said when he gave the comic I payed him and left. Quickly I looked at the front cover it was a picture of soildiers raiding are backup hideout. I sat reading the comic I finanly got to the last page me being shot with a green ray.

c'mon write please. i will tomorrow, but it is really late tonight.