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The Outcasts

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Should we start over? Only vote if you are part of the storybook please!

yes! i am lost
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No! I think we are doing fine
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I don't Care
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40%
 
Total votes : 5


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Plot: You are an outcast. There has always been something different about you, (your power). Soon people from the government came and tried to capture you, so you ran away to the woods where you find others like you who have also ran away. You team up and plan to overthrow the section of the government that is capturing kids like you for tests.
We will see what happens from there.

Rules:
1. All content has to be suitable for PG13 (you all know what that means)
2. relationships are allowed, but no sex scenes
3. No more than two characters per person
4. No killing off other people's characters without permission
5. This isn't a rule; just a want. Don't drop out
6. You must create a profile before writing
7. No God or god-like characters
8. Only one power per person, unless you PM me for permission first
9. Follow all of the rules

Profile form:
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Special ability:
What they look like:
Personalities:
Background info.:

My Profile:
Name: Robin

Gender: Female

Age:14

Special ability: bending the gravity around her and other objects (Flying)

What they look like: light-brown shoulder length hair that curls sightly when it gets wet. Her eyes are a dark brown, and if she stares at you for too long it seems as if she is looking right into your thoughts. She is short for her age, and her skin has an olive tint to it.

Personalities: She makes up for her height with her fiery attitude. She rarely talks, but when she does she has command in her voice (whether the others are willing to follow or not). Robin may seem strong on the outside, but inside she is about to collapse.

Background Info. : When she was eight the government captured her, and she was in their lab being tested on for five years before she escaped. Even though she escaped physically she is still trapped mentally, and has no memory of ever having a friend.



By the way:
You don't have to create both of your characters now you can introduce them later in the story without a profile, but you have to PM me first if you want to add a character later.
Also if you want your character to be an escapee from the government ask me first.
Remember no characters are perfect!
I hope you have fun!
If you want to join or already have joined here is our discussion forum:
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save me a spot please
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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Alrighty.


Name: Kayla Aarons

Gender: Female

Age: 14

Special ability: She can turn invisable and run really fast.

Appearance: http://cachens.corbis.com/CorbisImage/1 ... 685692.jpg She looks young for her age and is short.

Personalities: Bubbly and outgoing. Always wanted a lot of friends but never got any because she was an outcast.

Background info.: She wanted to be like everyone else. So when the government came for her she was terrified. She wished it wouldn't happen to her and she could just be like everybody else. So she ran, she could run faster then anybody if she tried and finally she got far enough and they couldn't find her.
"Can't stop, won't stop. I must be dreaming."




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Name:Max Barrington
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Special ability: Can stop time and "freeze" people in time for a few seconds. She cannot completely control this and makes up for this by knowing how to break into almost anything.
What they look like: Max is normal height and slender, she has brown hair that she likes to mess with alot, color and length wise. She has a large smile. She dresses in mostly sporty lothes so she can move easily.
Personalities: She is friendly and protective of secrets. She doesn't have very much a clue about people so people deem her as "weird".
Background info.: Parents dumped her at age 11 in New york so she picked up the skills of thieving, she only does it to get back at her parents because they own atleast half of the businesses in the known world. She can break into almost anything.
The one who smiles the most has something to hide.

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Name: Roland Aederman

Age: 19

Gender: male

Special Ability: Telekenisis. he can move objects with his mind. Over the years he has gotte good at controlling objects, and can now even move himself over short distances.

Personality: Will reveal as I write. if thats ok

Appearance: Tall with longish brown hair. He has blue eyes with golden flecks scattered through them. He is muscular.

Other: Up for love.
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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Name: Evan
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Special ability: He is an element manipulator, able to control the basic elements. Though when he fights when he chooses one he can not change that till two hours pass. Also the powers change his appearance and personality slightly.
What they look like: He has longish white hair, and white eyes, normal. But when he fights his eyes and hair change color, yellow for lightning, red for fire, brown for earth, blue for water and grayish for air. He is 5 foot 9, with the makings of a beard on his face. Handsome.
Personalities: He is usually laid back and calm. Able to make others like that. But when he uses his power he changes a bit. Electricity- he goes a bit more spontaneous. Fire- he gets a bit mean, but not much. Water-he gets very calm, but with a shorter fuse, earth- he is serious and a strong leader, Air- he is a free spirit not wanting to follow orders.
Background info.: He was raised in an orphanage sense born, he grew up hopeful and sweet. He was at a point when he was about to turn nasty when he was finally adopted at 11. He was brought to a California house where he made tons of friends. He loves to spread hopefulness because of what he had.
other: up for love

Hey lizzifer can I claim Max.
That User Who Changed Their Name A Dozen Times And So No One Ever Knew Who They Were Half the Time and When They Did Only Used Bolt.

The tragic tale of losing all #Brand for nothing in return.

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Name: Jay Jensen

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Special ability: Telepathy (sometimes he can let others communicate back and forth with him) and absorption of memories, skills, and powers through skin to skin contact. The longer the contact occurs, the longer he will retain the abilities or memories. If he maintains contact for long enough, the absorption can be permanent.

What they look like: He is tall, skinny, and has close-cropped, bronze hair. His light brown eyes sparkle, and he usually wears sunglasses. He has a scar on his cheek, but he never speaks about that.

Personalities: He is friendly and caring to the others; he seems like he could be a pacifist if there was not any problems with the government. Often, he helps those who don't deserve it. He was shy, especially when around things relating to his powers. He is brave and determined, filled with liveliness and passion.

Background info.: He is kind of shy, being a good friend with Robin. He's an orphan, never really getting to ever know his parents, let alone if they are alive or not. He picked up a few skills while he was alone: spying and lock-picking.
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Name:Jack

Gender: Male

Age:14

Special abilities: although he is a azing at hand to hand combat and with a gun when he has one his main abilities is healing try hard as you can you won't be able to kill this guy eaisily you'd need radiation to destroy the cells so they couldn't pull them selves back together.

What he looks like: longish brown hair with his fringe swept to the left wears jeans with a white tshirt and a black coat with lot of bullet holes in it from fight people often mock him in a playful way about how he has two change his white tshirt so much.

Personality: the fact that he heals from anything has left him care free and he love doing stunts he also has a serous side when it comes to his friends being captured

Background info: like Jay he is close friends with Robin though she somtimes doesn't achnolidge them he was 13 when they ca
E from him and only escaped because he accidently past paths with robin who helped him escape. He feels like he's compeating for her affection with. Jay but knows he won't probably be able to compeate with a mind reader his other two friends in the group are Evan and Max he thinksof all of the group as his family he would only trust his secrets with those three sadly he knows that Jay knows his secrets too




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Name: Kale

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Special ability: She has an electric current running on her skin. If she feels like it, she could shock you to death, just by touching it. Over years of practice, she's learned to gain the ability of being able to turn it off.

What they look like: She's pretty tall. (5'11) She has long, wavy, dark brown hair, but she usually keeps it pulled into a ponytail. Dark blue eyes. Beautiful smile.

Personalities: Kale is usually kind and sweet, but if you get her mad, she can be pretty fiery and passionate when defending herself (be it verbally or physically).

Background info.: Kale was raised in a nurturing family, but didn't want to endanger her parents as she began to experiment with her powers more. She ran away at age 13 and had been living on the streets. Despite her kind nature, she's a pretty tough girl.
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Name: Kori Baker

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Special ability: Has amazing photgraphic memory, and can fade into shadows, or even use someone else's shadow to fade into.

What they look like: Around '5"6, has fair skin. Always wears one of those black conductor hats. She has brown hair that is cut in a million layers, and is usually just everywhere. She has brown eyes, which sometimes turn to dark hazel depending on what she's wearing. She's a jeans and t-shirt/ hoodie kidn of girl/http://cutemew.deviantart.com/art/a-girl-40317415

Personalities: Apathetic to a point, slightly sarcastic at times, chooses not to talk often, very observant (So she understands usually what people are thinking easily by their expressions and body language).

Background info: Kori's parents always got calls from the counsellor. The reason: She didn't interact, and the counsellor thought something was wrong. The reason Kori didn't interact was because her parents didn't know about her powers, and she didn't want anyone to find out. Her parents and teachers thought that she was an outcast because she was a 98 percent average student (photographic memory). But when she was almost nabbed by the government for testing, Kori narrowly escaped, and she did this by using the shadows of an official, and sneaking away like that.
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Is that okay? I hope it didn't sound like she was 'perfect'.
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Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

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*I'm allowed two people right? anyway here it goes*

Name:Jesse

gender: Female

Age: 16

special ability: nice and simple super strength she can lift ruffly about the weight of three trucks in one hand apart from that she's not really that good at fighting and tends to let every one else do the fighting and the work

what they look like: she has long auburn hair and weirs raggedy clothes not really caring what people think about her since shes an outcast.

personality: she's kind of socially retarded and is only good at speaking to *insert who ever the hell you want here*

background info: has wondered around by her self for ages thinking that she's better than every one else she rarely fights and thinks that guys should do all of the fighting, which is why shes had five people with her and all five have ended up captured inpaticular Rob a Mind reader shes now carrying their baby at 8 months pregnant she doesn't know if Rob is dead or captured she's determined to find out

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Name: Kylie

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Special ability: shape shifter. Typically can just change her human appearance to any she desires. Hasn't been able to change to much other than that, though she hasn't felt the need to try.

What they look like: Her true appearance consists of short and straight black hair (about to her shoulders) and silver eyes. She is relatively tall, skinny, and tan.

Personalities:Likes to take charge. Intelligent and creative and quick thinking. A good actor bcuz she can change her personality to fit who she is at the momeny. But she can be rather bossy and mysterious, most see her as untrustworthy.

Background info.: Doesn't like to talk much about her past (maybe she'll reveal something as the story goes on). She has been on her own for a while and gets everything she needs done done with the use of her shape shifting.
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Name: Nicole Dremonty

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Special ability: Heals and is virtually invincible. She is also a skilled fighter, even though her soft looks may deceive you.

What they look like: http://Azalea-the-Phantom.deviantart.co ... l-24581422

Personalities: Nicole is very quiet and withdrawn but also very sweet.

Background info.: She has become a bit paranoid about her powers, because she hasn't changed at all from when she turned 16, not aging. Nicole thinks it is from her powers and sometimes wishes she didn't have them at all.
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*when can we start?*
The one who smiles the most has something to hide.

..i'm lonely...message me..some how add me on your social networking site (unless you are some creepy weirdo who stalks girls for their organ harvesting company..i personally like them inside of me thankyou :) )



The best speculative fiction peels your mind and shows you the familiar from a direction you have not looked in before
— Neil Gaiman