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Should we start over? Only vote if you are part of the storybook please!

yes! i am lost
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No! I think we are doing fine
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I don't Care
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I walked towards the boy. I could noticed that his hair changed quickly from grayish to white.

"Did you do that?" I asked.

"Yeah," he smiled to himself, "I did. I'm an element manipulator."

"That's pretty cool." I decided. "I'm Kylie."

"Evan." he introduced himself.

"So how did you come to be here?" I asked.

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So Evan....I'm not sure if he is in the hideout yet...So if he isn't I can change this. Or it can be a good place for him to just put himself there. I don't know.
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boltageman wrote:Okay I think we should start eliminating the ability to post a single sentence. They are to short.


*Isn't it like against the rules somewhere...?


And I'm waiting until someone does something I can do something off of. I'm like in the hideout waiting for everyone to get there. Maybe we should have a few government agents come and find us.*
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*Isn't it like against the rules somewhere...?


Wait do you mean its against the rules to make the short ones, or to not allow short ones.

Because if it is the second one the creator can make a rule to stop those.
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*I thought I had read somewhere one sentenced posts weren't allowed here. I thought we should start over, that way we aren't lost.*
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I'm dropping out sorry good idea but nothings happening and I don't want to start over and it seams we will sorry.




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*Why drop out? Come on, we really need the people, and I like the plot.*
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Yeah same here.

And we have the right to drop out if we want to, you can't make us stay.
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*Was that pointed at me? Excuse me, I was just asking you guys to stay. I know you have the right to leave -_- *
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Are we going to keep going with this or what? If we start over lets please do it soon.
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I'll give it a week, I guess. If nothing happens by then, I'm out. Sorry.
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I second that. Sorry guys.
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Lauren2010 wrote:Are we going to keep going with this or what? If we start over lets please do it soon.


I agree. :D
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I say we start over.
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Then let's do it. Shall we start a whole new thread or just restart it on here?
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It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
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