Antigone's Critique Shop

Title: The Importance of Doing
Genre: I put it under science fiction, but it kind of is and isn't. Yeah...
Summary: A girl tries to convince herself to work on an English project in the future!
Link: post499290.html#499290

I'll get to it tomorrow, promise! (eleven o'clock here, heh.)

Done, Poet!

Please?


Title: Cold blood
Genre: Other, for now
Summery: Uh, a classroom. Steven is a smartarse, but gets away with it.
Wordcount: around a thousand. Just over two pages worth.
Link: topic43108.html


Oh, and PS: I hate twilight too. Considering turning this into a vampire story with utterly no romance, just killing and stuff. Inspired by my hatred of Twilight.

Killing? Yay!

I'll get to it now.

Done, Nutty.

Rosey posted a review for you while I was working on mine, so some of our critique is the same.

Hey Sakura

Title: Prince of Janovia
Genre: Fantasy Fiction
Summary: I would like you to review the second half of a chapter. I'm worried you won't though because it's kind of long lol Basically in the first half of chapter 1 I introduce a character called Blaine who is the Prince of Janovia (bet you didn't see that coming!) and he is called to an urgent alliance meeting. The second half of the chapter picks up in the alliance meeting. Sorry I can't give more, I don't really know where it is going.
Link: topic43110.html

Thank you!

P.S. Here is the link to the first half, just in case topic42148.html
Oh and I'm terrible at grammar so have fun!

I'll get to it tomarrow - promise! It's eleven o' clock right now...

^_^

Becki - Done!

Thank you! I replied on the story.

Anyone else?

Yay! I love this forum. Can you perhaps assist me?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43298.html

Lyric Poetry, called 'The Butterflies Dance No More'.

Muchos gracias!

~Evi

I'll try my best. ^_^

Eek! Wonderful review, Haruno. I'm a bad girl. I forgot to check your guidlines and failed to see that you hesitate to do poetry. But! Your review was very helpful!

Thanks.

~Evi

*twiddles thumbs*

Anyone?