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Anyone else?
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Title: The Elves are Coming
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: post492214.html
Word count: Around 615

I <3 Sakura. You should all give her points ;)
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Title: Shine Bright, Little Baby
Genre: Lyric Poetry (I think...at least, that's what I submitted it in) :?
Just a poem I wrote for my brand-new baby cousin. :)
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*anti-pop
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

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For bother of you!

Anti-pop, sorry, my review of your amazing poem is horrendous. But I did warn you about poetry... ^_^

Who's next?
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
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Can you pretty please review this? Just so you know this was a sudden impulse song. And Isaac Slade is The Fray's lead singer. They say they're not a Christian band but...

Here you go. Tear er' apart!
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Hi :D I was hoping you could review this for me if you dont mind

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Title : Weavers Ch 3
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: Emily comes from a family of assassins that use their magic to complete their missions. She herself doesn't much like that thought of murder and is determined to somehow spare her four year sister, Katie, from the same fate.

I think it's three pages exact, so I hope that's not too long for you :3




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Hellooo Sakura! :D

Title: Insomnia
Genre: Fantasy (not quite yet)
Not much of a plot yet. This is just a lame first chapter.
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...Bitter cold, it grows
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cynicism the new norm...

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Eeek! Where did you all come from?

Alright, I promise I will get to you guys by this evening. I came on here to check... and three of you came! Right now I have to go...

So...

In Que:
-Threnody
-pandapez- three pages is fine ^_^
-anti-pop (I'm really excited to read your fiction)
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
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Forever Threnody- Done!

Pandapez- Getting to it now!

EDIT: Done Pandapez! I loved it! Onto Anti-pop!
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
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hey sakura

Title: Forbidden Love
Genre: Romantic Fiction
Summary: A brother and sister are reunited after 15 years, but something has happen to the sister.
Link: topic42629.html
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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Done Anti-pop!

Night- I will get to you as soon as possible. The Chinese part of my family is having a Chinese New Year party- I have to leave in a few minutes.
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
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Night Mistress- Voila! It's done!
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
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Hey! Can you review this again? I just posted the latest version of it and I needs some more feedbacks

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RGallagher - Finished!

:D

Any more?
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
-Catullus, Carmen 85




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*twiddles thumbs*
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
-Catullus, Carmen 85



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