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Hi,
I'm entering my story in a contest so it needs to be top notch. It is an excerpt from a novel, so things are going a bit slow. If you could do it by January 5th I would be on top of the world. If you can't though, I understand.

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Love,
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lakegirls is done! :D [I did hers first because it had a deadline.]
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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I'm just working on Blink's. :wink: Twooster's should be done presently as well.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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Eeep, just give me a few more hours, people.
Subsequently, don't hesitate to give me more requests. We're never lacking capacity. :wink:
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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I recently wrote what is almost my first 'short' story. Since I don't read a lot of short stories, I'm just not sure how good mine is...:)
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Thank you so much!!




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400 words
other fiction
8)

Kirsten shall be eternally grateful ;)
and she needs to catch up on those TTV chapters she's missed
*Scampers off to do so*
x
for what are we without words and stories?




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Getting to them, people! :D
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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Hmm. I see you're very busy. But could you do the 10th Bubbling when you have time? No one hasn't reviewed it yet :(

So here it is, again:

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Thanks, Sarah. You're sweet.

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I'll get onto it, sugah. :wink:
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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Done!
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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Twooster's is done! :D
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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I'm back on the game, so feel free to hassle me for more.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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You've read chapters 1 and two, now it is time for you to read chapter 3.


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Er, me? *raises hand tentatively*
*points to above post*




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Lol, Anna. :D I couldn't do your critique since it's one you entered in my contest.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.



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