Hey Sarah, I'm back for another review Title: Doctor/Mister Vanderguard-Milton
Link: topic39909.html Genre: Other Fiction
It's the first part. So the plot has not developed at all yet-what I really need help on is wording and descriptions. Any suggestions you have to offer are much appreciated!
'life tastes sweeter when it's wrapped in poetry' -the wombats
kissthewitch - We've already gone over why I can't review that certain piece lol.
Galerius - Workin' on it now.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Hi there, I would be eternally grateful for your thoughts on my newest piece.
I have added to the end of the story the things that I am specifically looking for, but anything you can contribute is appreciated!
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Sarah! Wow! People really, really love your reviews! I can totally see how, too, you know, you are just amazing... and that's why I would love you forever (not that I already don't) if you could review my prologue to this story I'm writing and not sure if I'm continuing .
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Haruno and anti - you're in queue this very moment.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
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