Disclaimer:
The establishment is not responsible for any injury, blood loss, or health detrimentation that these reviews may induce.
It would make Queen Sarah delighted if you requested a review from the castle, so please do so. Being royal, our critiques are the creme de la creme, detailed and helpful, with quality as well as excessive quantity.
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> NO multiple chapter requests, but feel free to ask for a crit a second time.
> Peeps who've critted my stuff will be favoured.
> Don't stalk me for critiques if I'm a bit late. You'll be ignored and your request deleted.
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Warning: If you cannot take this kind of collossal slaughtering, then I suggest you go elsewhere.
[Link to an example of a critique of mine. It's at the bottom of the page.]
Golden Rules:
Tell me the title, link, and genre of your piece.
Example:
Title: Story Of Wonder And Doom
Link: http://youngwriterssociety.com/storyofwonderanddoom
Genre: Fantasy
Genres:
Sarah Would Smile Upon:
-Historical
-Romantic
-Other
-Poetry
-Non-Fiction
-Fantasy
Sarah Would Frown Upon:
-Fan-fiction
-Sci-Fi
-Adventure/Action.
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I will give details on spelling mistakes, grammatical mistakes, your strengths, your weaknesses, characters, storyline, description, overall and your writing style. If you want specific help/comments on an area of your piece, just tell me what that is in your request.
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Completed:
The Promise by springrain
Snowflakes by mizziceberg
A Titleless Story by lucyy
[url=http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30187.html[/url]Carson Lanye's Story[/url] by CK Lynn
The Mansion - 1 by Lord Anzius
The Mansion - 2 by Lord Anzius
Predicament by kissthewitch
Eternal Sunshine by AngelOfDeath
Tamia's Quest by Nutty
The Zipper Of Your Pants by Nutty
So Goes the Museum by Galerius
Famous Last Words by dreamintechnicolour
Alone by springrain2693
Chapter One [Untitled] by Haruno Sakura
Pretty People by antipop
Red,Blue,Purple by TeddyBear22
Short Horror Story by Lucyy.
Ch 1-Scavenger by TL-G Wooster
Sister by Ducati
Watching Mermaids by sofi
Angel's Symphony -5 by angels-symphony
Walking in the Dark by LoveableLittleSock
Jimmy by Ducati
Bubbling Chapter 10 by Demeter
Chapter 4 by Blink
Short Story by lost_in_dreamland
Them by lakegirls
Scavenger - 1.1 by TL G-Wooster
The Forest by Anna09
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In Queue:
None
On with the [s]slaughtering[/s] reviewing.
