Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
@_@ Hello I'm Shina and I'm a little confused. Or ALOT! I don't think my posts are going through correctly. Here is my review request for Sara ^^ Maybe It will go through now.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
I noticed you were about so could you please review my story Jimmy.
topic40936.html Sorry I haven't done your review yet. I'm kind of medically out of it. But i can't sleep either.
When you look at your life, in a strange new room, maybe drowning soon, is this the start of it all?
Thank you Sarah! I have 2 more that in desparate need of editing. First an attempt at poetry, the second a chapter in my novel I think should be read. Thank you ^^
Shina, the rules say I don't do multiple requests, lol. ^ ^ So I'll try to get to at least one of those.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Oops . Sorry ! Well do you think you could review chapter 22 of my novel then? If you have time. Sorry again, for making newbie mistakes. I'm trying to reduce the number of them.
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.
The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.
Hey namesake =]
I'm actually still working on your story in the AC forum. I have to finish that... Only up to chapter four at the moment, and I've been too lazy. Sorry! It'll be done soon! I promise!
I just posted this, and it took me five hours to write. Unfortunately you would expect it to be long, but it's only about 1,000 words. Don't ask me how it took me so long, please. I don't know XD
I don't know if you reviewed the other piece of the same name, but this is the first chapter of the story, and I also wrote another half of a chapter in the middle of the story, which is linked in the link I'm about to give you. And the link to the plot summary is linked in the link in the link I'm about to give you. It's in the romantic fiction section, but in this particular chapter there really is no romance, so just a heads up.
Thanks a bunch!
~*Sara*~
Hey there, namesake! ^_^
That's fine and dandy, but where be the link?
-Sarah with a H!
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Never mind, Sara. I think I found the link. And it's done!
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
. Sorry ! Well do you think you could review chapter 22 of my novel then? If you have time. Sorry again, for making newbie mistakes. I'm trying to reduce the number of them.
