Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
I'm going off on a bit of a critique craze this weekend, so if you apply now, they'll all get done instantaneously.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Will her excellency be delighted in reading a new story of mine. Oh, and I bought a gift for your table. It is posted in Romantic Fiction and is called Eternal Sunshine. I hope you enjoy it.
Angel, the Queen will work on your story of Eternal Sunshine with pleasure.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Hey! I wrote this a while ago, and I realized I should probably work on it, and continue, It has a few helpful critiques, but I would love another angle to get an idea on what I want to work on.
Title- Tamia's Quest (rewritten)
Genre- Fantasy Fiction
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Thanks ^^
It's not easy having a good time. Even smiling makes my face ache.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Could you go over this for me? Be aware it's part three, and it *may* be helpful if you quickly read one and two, (both short and don't need crits) but you don't have to. It should make okay sense on its own.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
