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post884571.html#p884571 Could you review this for me? Please and thank you
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All finished. Who needs a review?
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Could you review that story for me its for a contest due next week, and i'm not sure if its all polish up yet. I don't mind you being hard on the story. Aside from the grammar, can you comment on the plot, style and the characters involve in this.

Thanks, and I'll review one of your pieces as return :)
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Anyone?
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Hey Rascal!!
Could you review this story for me?
Broken Pieces.Prologue
Is the prologue of a novel I'm working on right now.
Is under Romantic Novels.

Thanks in advance :D
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Hey, I was wondering if you could read my poem Lust
I feel like it needs a lot of work, especially since right now it's a weird cross between prose and poetry and I'm not exactly sure what it is.
Thanks so much in advance.
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Please and Thankyou:)
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Hello, I would love it if you could take a look at my novel:) Thanks so much!




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I just got sick, but I will def. take a look at your request tomorrow :(
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All done.

Who else needs a review?! :smt003
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Hello, I would love for you to write an review for the first chapter of my book: topic85422.html#p895266
The book is an Fantasy (I'm a fantasy freak).
Thanks! ^^




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Review, please? Thank you very much, I really appreciate it!
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Hi!
Could you please look at this for me?
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And if you can, maybe the second chapter? Thanks!
Please make sure to check out my portfolio! Any comments are immensely desired!




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