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Twit
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Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:37 pm
Twit says... · Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:37 pm
If you could cast a critical eye over this thing that I think is a poem, twould be greatly appreciated. :)
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir




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Rascalover
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Tue Apr 12, 2011 6:57 pm
Rascalover says... · Tue Apr 12, 2011 6:57 pm
All done who's next? 8)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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itsjustemilie
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:55 am
itsjustemilie says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:55 am
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A review on my poem would be handy, if your up for it (:
ItJustEmilie!




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Tigersprite
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:45 pm
Tigersprite says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:45 pm
Could you please review this, Rasca? Thanks in advance,

Tiger
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Rascalover
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:47 pm
Rascalover says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:47 pm
All done who's next? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Bivrax
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Rascalover
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Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:14 am
Rascalover says... · Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:14 am
All done who's next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Fri Apr 15, 2011 7:19 pm
Rascalover says... · Fri Apr 15, 2011 7:19 pm
bump :)

Anyone needin' a review? :pirate3:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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TylynRae
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Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:19 am
TylynRae says... · Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:19 am
topic79478.html This is a link to my new piece, short story, called Sinews, It would be great if you would review it and if you like it, it would be great if you shared it with other people =] I also have a featured piece called Hush if you like Sinews. Thanks =]
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Rascalover
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Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:38 pm
Rascalover says... · Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:38 pm
All done. Who's next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Chickensandwitch
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Rascalover
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Sat Apr 23, 2011 10:54 pm
Rascalover says... · Sat Apr 23, 2011 10:54 pm
All done. Who's next? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Butterfinger
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Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:14 pm
Butterfinger says... · Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:14 pm
I don't know how to link, but could you review some of mine?
If you want to be a great writer, don't think about what you're going to write, just write it.

I'm a huge fan of writers block! When your brain halts, with no direction for where you should go, it gives you threads. All you have to do is pull and unravel the story you're meant to write.




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Rascalover
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Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:43 pm
Rascalover says... · Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:43 pm
Any thing specific?

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There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Twit
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Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:22 pm
Twit says... · Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:22 pm
Second chapter of a story of mine you reviewed a while ago, if you'd be so kind? :)
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir



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