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Rascalover
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Mon Aug 08, 2011 6:48 am
Rascalover says... · Mon Aug 08, 2011 6:48 am
All done; who's next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Skylar16
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Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:03 am
Skylar16 says... · Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:03 am
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Here's my story if you could review it and give me some feed back on it, please? What you think about it, what I could Improve on, puncuation if any etc.

And thanks!
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Tigersprite
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Mon Aug 08, 2011 9:30 pm
Tigersprite says... · Mon Aug 08, 2011 9:30 pm
Hey, Rasca! You reviewed Chapter One, so I was wondering if you could please review Smoke and Fire: Two?

Thanks in advance,

Tiger
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Rascalover
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Tue Aug 09, 2011 3:50 am
Rascalover says... · Tue Aug 09, 2011 3:50 am
All done. Who's next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Mon Aug 22, 2011 12:19 am
Rascalover says... · Mon Aug 22, 2011 12:19 am
Bump :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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housecat
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Courtlyn
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Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:39 am
Courtlyn says... · Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:39 am
Mine? Thanks a million! :)
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Idea? Drop me a line!
I love to research things.I do mostly nonfiction pieces such as current events, political/ethical/religious topics,and historical/scientific research.If you've a question you'd like answered or a topic about which you'd like to know more,I'll gladly write you a piece on it!




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Rascalover
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Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:29 pm
Rascalover says... · Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:29 pm
All done.
I just got adjusted to college life, so my reviews will be on time now, and more in depth i promise :)


Who needs a review?! :pirate3:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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dhanshucool
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Fri Sep 16, 2011 7:13 am
dhanshucool says... · Fri Sep 16, 2011 7:13 am
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Your review on 3km story was really helpful. I will correct those mistakes. If you dont mind can you review the above topic too, so that I will come to know what kind of problem I have exactly ...
-Dan




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UrbanNomad
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Sun Sep 18, 2011 10:36 am
UrbanNomad says... · Sun Sep 18, 2011 10:36 am
Hi there,
if you want to review my poem
post916429.html?hilit=clouds#p916429

it is called "Clouds" and is about writers block
Thanks, Oliver




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Rascalover
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Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:38 pm
Rascalover says... · Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:38 pm
Allll done!

Who's next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:19 pm
Rascalover says... · Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:19 pm
Anyone?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:33 pm
Rascalover says... · Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:33 pm
Desperate for reviews :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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UrbanNomad
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Fri Oct 07, 2011 10:39 pm
UrbanNomad says... · Fri Oct 07, 2011 10:39 pm
Hello! Could you please give me some feedback on "The New Congregation". I am looking to refine it down from its initial presentation.
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Thanks in advance
Oliver




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Laurence Branson
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Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:45 am
Laurence Branson says... · Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:45 am
Hey :)
Could you review my work: post921343.html#p921343
I recently edited it and so need it to be re-reviewed haha
thanks :)
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