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topic90467.html Can you review my short story? Please and thank you.
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all done, who's next? :pirate3:
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Why hello there ^_^

It'd be fantastic if you'd review my poem for me. Something's wrong with it but I don't know what.

Thanks in advance :)
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It wont let me click on your link for your poem :( Send another and I will definitely look at it.

For now who else needs a review?! :D
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It's newly edited. Thanks! :D
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apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
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can you review: http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 26&t=92647

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all done :D

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Hello!

Would love a review on this:

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Thanks in advance :)




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Your welcome!

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Will you please review this novel? Thanks! :D
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All done!

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Hello,
I am new to YWS. The atmosphere around here is very inspiring. I couldn't stop myself from posting my work. I have written an article On Euthanasia;it's pros and cons under the General Articles category of the non-fiction section. I would be immensely grateful If you put forward your views about it. I would appreciate criticism as well! thank you! :) I have given the link below -
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Hey, I'm scify. this is my new thing i've been working on. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks
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Hey I'm Fiction. I would really appreciate if you could review my poem. Thank you so much.




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