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Anyone?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Hey! Want to review this for me? I'll love you forever.

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Please and thank you.




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All done :)

Who's next? :smt032
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Me maybe? post758014.html#p758014 or perhaps topic67412.html
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
Oscar Wilde




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All done who's next :) ???
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Here's one!
Spoiler
Despite what it may seem like, it is realistic fiction.


I read that you enjoyed critiquing realistic more than fantasy, so just thought that I would give you that spoiler! I'm trying to keep it a bit hush hushed so that it will shock some people. Muhaha! 8)

Please and thank you!! :D

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"I can't afford a teddy bear, so I sleep with this contact solution."


Taran: He will not succeed in this. Somehow, we must find a way to escape. We dare not lose hope.

Fflewddur: I agree absolutely, your general idea is excellent; it's only the details that are lacking.




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Awesome :)
Hope it helped.

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There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Anyone??
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Hello! This is a poem, topic69750.html

Thanks for reviewing

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!




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oh! What about lyrics?
check out my deviantart account ^_^
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yes i do review lyrics :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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all done
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver




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Hey there! Mind if you review this non-fiction for me? Thanks in advance! :]
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14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.



I didn't know beards could do that ;)
— ShadowVyper