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Hey Tiffany. Would you love doing next part of my story? Seventh chapter is up and I need reviews on that. The link is in my signature.

Thanks in advance!

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Could you review the first chapter of my fantasy novel? The link is in my signature. Thank you!




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Will you review my homework for me please? :smt003 It's a monologue, by the way. I've got lots of reviews, but I've edited it a bit and would like some more opinions on the edited version.

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Sorry it's kind of bad... I don't like homework

Thanks in advance,

xoxo Rhian
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Finished all of them thanks for rwequesting a review.


Who else would like one? :mrgreen:
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bummmmmp :pirate3:
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Hey yall im back had a change of cable :)

Who needs a review? Do I have to beg? :)
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No begging here!! post719654.html#p719654 Thanks in advance!
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All done

Who else??
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Could you review this for me? Thanks.
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Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

Information:

Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.
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All done anyone else need a review????
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I would like a review, pleeeeaaaassseeee.
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