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If you're up for a laugh I could do with some feedback on this:
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Cheers.




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All done :)
Sorry I was gone for so long, but Im back and will be so happy for some stuff to review :)

So whos next??
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Hey there :)

Could you please review my fantasy fiction? Don't worry, there are no vampires or werewolves e.t.c. It's kind of a mix between fantasy fiction and realistic fiction. :wink:
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Thanks in advance,

xoxo Skins
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All done. hope I was helpful.


Whose next??? :smt003
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Hey can you review this? I know its long but I need reviews. So read some part and review for others. As you wish. Won't mind if you turn my piece down.
A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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All done.

Whose next ??? :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thanks for the reviews dear. This is what I would like you to review next. Please!!!

A Criminal's Heart Chapter-2
A criminal's heart chapter-3
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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All done any one else need some reviews? :) :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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any one????
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Hey there RascalLover. I must say that your avatar is so cool and pretty. Really!

Can you review est of the chapter of my novel-A Criminal's Heart? Just do 4 and 5 now, if its okay. the link is down on my signature. Thanks a lot!

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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All done I hope they were helpful.

Anyone else need a review?! :pirate3:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html




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Hey there. Here asking for reviews.Fancy reviewing this?Love has no boundaries I would review for you if you like.

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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All done and thank you.

Anyone else need a review :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html




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bump****
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Do I have to begg... cause I will :pirate3:
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html



"In my contact with people I find that, as a rule, it is only the little, narrow people who live for themselves, who never read good books, who do not travel, who never open up their souls in a way to permit them to come into contact with other souls -- with the great outside world."
— Booker T. Washington, Up From Slavery