Random Vampire Story 2

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Nick

I looked at her once, then turned away as I felt my eyes moisten slightly. God, stop it! Stop it!

I sighed, reaching up and pinching the bridge of my nose, slyly wiping a tear away in the process.

"Yeah..." I whispered. "I won't touch another human...I won't let anyone close to my heart...ever again."
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Anney

"Are you sure that's the best solution?" I asked softly. "If you never let anyone close to your heart, you'll never be able to forget."

"Why would I forget?"

His tone grew slightly harsh again.

"You wouldn't forget, so much as ease the pain. You'd have a reason to go on," I kept my voice gently, touching his arm lightly with my hand in a calming matter.
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Nick

I tensed at her touch. It was alien to me: kind, caring, gentle...one of a friend.

And, although it was a nice action, it alarmed me.

"I'm not ready for others, yet," I stammered, moving to pull away. "I'm still...not sure."

I glanced at her over my shoulder. Even in the shadows cast by the night and her hood, I could see kindness in her eyes.

In Isabelle's reincarnation. Anney had to be.
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Anney

"Life is never sure," I replied, allowing him to move away. I understood why he would be apprehensive.

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Nick

I scoffed lightly. That was ironic, true...

"It can change in a heartbeat," I replied, forcing myself to not take a step away from her.

I hesitated. I had to get used to company, to her. But...how?

"Would you..." I stammered. Damn! This is so hard to do! "Would you mind keeping me company? Helping me?"
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Anney

I smiled softly, nodding.

"I would be glad to," I replied softly.

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Nick

I nodded, gesturing towards a small diner just across the street. I had been there before; it was a pleasant place. Calm, quiet, private, away from others.

**All I've got, sorry...**
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Anney

Smiling, I followed him to the diner.

"I'm Anney, by the way," I said, realizing I still didn't know his name.

"Nick," he replied quietly, obvious still thinking.
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Tristan:

Tristan hoped that Angel would keep quiet as Syblya *hope that's right name* came back. HE smiled when she did and scooted over again so she could sit down.


*tears*
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Sybyla

Tristian and Angel looked so nervous. Maybe I shouldn't have sat down...

"Sybyla," Angel said thoughtfully, "I like that name." Her smile was sweet and genuine. I smiled back.

"Thank you. I've always thought so."

"Very unsual," Kyle commented.

I shrugged again smiling, I liked them. "It fits me. It means "purple" in Gaelic, so I thought it would be amusing to die my hair purple just to see who would get it."

Angel giggled, "I wish I could do something like that, but the only thing I could do was give myself wings."


Angel

She was a weird one, but I liked her. In my head I was already plotting out her and Tristian's wedding. But he would murder me if I said anything like that out loud.

I knew he liked her too, in a different way than I did. I reconized that heart sick stare that he was giving her.
I just lost the game.




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Tristan:

Tristan felt his face get hot when Syblya looked his way. He looked away quickly not wanting to get caught. He grabbed his cup quickly and gulped down the liquid. He was truely going insane.


*Tears, .sorry I'm a lil' rusty.*
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Sybyla

I repressed the giggle that threatened to excape when he started blushing.

"Sib!" A familiar and scary voice called from the kitchen. Crap I ws in trouble now.

"I gotta run," I said quickly and ran away. The other waitress would get the table. But rignt now I just had to get out before James's lackey caught me. I wansn't going back to that vampire's house for anything. he wasn't going to change me.

Angel

"I wonder what that was about..." I mused out loud.

"Somebody back there sounded pissed" Kyle said.

"Yeah."
I just lost the game.




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*I have no idea what to post...I'm still exhausted and sore from ROTC Camp...ugh...*
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***It's ok****


Tristan:

"I'm going to go see." Tristan said jumping up and rushing after her to make sure she didn't get in trouble.


*tears*


Kyle:

"He's gonna get himself kicked out or something." Kyle laughed looking at Angel. "Guess it's just us now. He never was one to stick around for long."


*wow, bad*
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Sybyla

"Hey Sib! Wait up!" Tristian's voice called. She spun around and faced him. "What's up?"

"Just..." She looked over his shoulder and saw the lackey coming after her. She muttered a curse and dragged Tristian towards the alley.

"Syb-"

"Shush just run!"
I just lost the game.



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